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Externalization

aka External

  • I was born on November 23
  • My occupation is Gamer, astronomer, warlord, fiction writer, spore player, secret servicemen, pilot, many others. Also related to the Ukrainian prime minister.
  • I am a badass
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  • Excuse me would you like to roleplay anything fictionverse related that is non official or canon?

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  • Could you help me with ideas for my page any tips or something i would like to remake my empire's page's into a great popular page like The Waptoria one for example.

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  • So I've had a plan of adding the Crys'lrith known as Drisaadi into the story, one plan I have is that he would cause trouble (in this case, mind control people) and Zsark would have to find a way to stop it. If you have a different plan for him, or you don't want him to be in the story at all, let me know.

    Also, by confirming this you would have to be in the Titanpad whenever I work on ZB, unfortunately I do not want to do anything with Drisaadi that would be out of character in the story.

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  • Hey, would you like to add a quote about the KRMS from the Draekar Remnant on the KRMS page? Also, what should the current standing be listed as between the two?

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  • So I have confirmed that the Miigish have accepted the trade agreement, so I will write that date down on the KRMS page. However, what other possible interaction do you think could go on between these races?

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  • Impy wanted to send you this message, though due to computer problems, I volunteered to send you this message. We have been talking about your stuff recently on the IRC. While I am impressed with the quality of your creations and your fiction for a new guy (still needs some work though), I think you have a few problems that need to be rectified if you wish to continue working on your fiction.

    • Most important: Planes of Existence are no longer created. They are established regions that are rarely used in fiction and no more should be added unless with the consent of the community as a whole.
    • Art-style, you borrow a bit too much from Xho, what with your creatures and fractal art. Drawing inspiration is okay, outright copying is frowned upon, and Xho himself is particularly touchy about that. If you want to become prominent here, you should attempt to develop a unique creature style, to do your own thing.
    • You also borrow things from other users: some sections of your fiction are copied, sometimes word to word, such as the culture of the Plazith League. That is a pretty big offense and you should try to rectify it when possible.
    • In general originality is preferred, so even when you borrow things from other fiction (like with, say, the Sovereignty of Kau), you should try to add your own elements. You mostly borrowed all the names and abilities - trying to diverge from the D&D archetype would improve your fiction a lot.
    • Also, you cannot use symbols you did not create yourself or asked someone else to create for you. You thus must replace or remove the Vitiate Sith Empire's sigil you use for the Draekar Remnant.

    I hope the following points will be understood and followed - for your sake as well as for ours. We have standards and rules, and you would do well to abide by them.

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    • I am absolutely sure. They are really an embarrassment (Like many of the previous quotes I've been getting rid of), and I'd rather not keep them.

      Those I'm not deleting need a rewrite anyways.

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    • Fair enough. I'll still undelete pages if you change your mind at any point - though if you are as unhappy with them as you say, you may prefer to simply remake the pages at the same name, and not keep the old edit history. Best of luck with the rewrites!

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  • Hey, I just wanted to know how y'all make those fancy boxes with color schemes for the transmissions on the talk pages so I can be up to par with y'all

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    • Well, they're hard to make once you start, but when you learn how to make them, they aren't hard at all.

      See Template:Msg/Draekar for mine. The "#s" are HTML color codes. Feel free to use mine and experiment with it until you find your empires preferred message.

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    • Apologies for butting in.

      While I can't give a good explanation for what templates are since I'm a newbie myself, they are pretty easy once you get used to it. In my experience, you can make your own page where you make your template and test it there. There's really no need to borrow someone else's template page if you don't feel like it.

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    • Making a message template from scratch when you don't know how to make it is hard, so it would be better to borrow and reversed engineer mine.

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    • Externalization wrote: Making a message template from scratch when you don't know how to make it is hard, so it would be better to borrow and reversed engineer mine.

      Right, I do have some tips that are probably not shown on the tutorial page.

      Type= displays the template depending on what you're typing to.

      For example:

      Type=start is the default template.

      Type=reply is the template for replying or writing a second template in the same section.

      Message= is where you type what you intend to say. For example

      Message=This is the message that shows on the template.

      This is the message that shows on the template.

      Overseer Zsark
      This is the message that shows on the template when you replace type=start with type=reply.

      If you don't want to make a template from scratch, make one on your template page, then you can copy and paste it for anytime.

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  • Hey External! I left a message on the wall of the Plazith League, in case you didn't see.

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  • I am on Titanpad if you wish to begin the story.

    (Sorry I'm late)

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  • Hello. As noted by some members of the community, there are some things to address regarding the Westanios Kulara Triumvirate before we can consider them canon.

    For starters, they break the age rule of the setting. Koldenwelt is 30,000 years old, yet you're giving your empire ages of 170,000 or more. You must adjust your ages and keep in mind we already have plenty of pre-established ancient races, we discourage the addition of more dozens-of-thousand-year-old active civilizations.

    Also, some users have expressed concern over your City-State of Corance's alleged size. Being a city state implies it's made up of a single city, yet you claim it extends to three different regions, something that would not be physically possible.

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