Thread:Draco Tethla/@comment-2081141-20130613030853

When writing fictions, avoid making sweeping statements like (quote) allowing for some of the most successful landings and deployments in military history (/quote), because military history is a very large topic, and there are quite a few races around that would disagree with your assertions :P

Other than that, good work so far. Come on the IRC sometime if you ever feel the urge to socialise/get advice from the rest of us. 