Thread:Cyrannian/@comment-2081141-20121005160703/@comment-1017052-20121021135134

I like Antediluvian too; in my opinion, he is a very charismatic and somewhat enigmatic figure; you did a great work to show his intelligence and wits and make him a very dangerous villain, which I was never truly able to accomplish (my villains tend to be over-the-top and/or incompetent). That's what I like in your fiction anyway; you always manage to show your villains' competence.

Regarding plagiarism and such... well, after re-watching all of Star Wars and starting to play SWTOR I learned to embrace Cyrannus's style. Galactic Empire vs Borg (made by Sith Empire, too) vs Twelve Colonies vs Covenant is kinda awesome.

What is a more definite flaw in your fiction is that, in case of Antediluvian and to lesser extent, the Empire as whole, you spend too much work and time to make him appear invincible and omnipotent, which in my opinion isn't required. I like Antediluvian as a character who uses his wits to get what he wants, not his magic powas (even though he rarely uses them). Of course, there may be a reason for that, so I don't really know. (so in case you disagree and there is a reason for that, don't mind that)