Fiction talk:Second War of Black Fog/Original/Kraw Galaxy vs Loron

Lucario, you silly
I had to majorly fix your story, and it's not even done yet.


 * The Tahars don't care about Lezia's petting. They know how to respect Asgordian culture.
 * The Tahars and the Asgord were already allies, never read the encounter? =P
 * Ko'han is a serious person. BISCUITS? Come on!

And I still have this to fix, and it needs you, Lucario.


 * The Tahars are very intelligent. They wouldn't ask the FRA for military help, that would be far too stupid. They would ask the FKA or the Kraw Instead.