Thread:Monet47/@comment-5496489-20150824231933

So I'm planning on submitting an article to the PGPS called "The Purpose and Morality of Containment"(dealing with the United Persan Descendants and their protocol for dealing with races they conquer). Here is a link to where it is, link.

Anyway since I'm new to this, I was just looking for an opinion of someone with more experiance(you having written good ones yourself and having had good counter argument towards others) on whether or not this seems well thought out and written since I want to create something of reasonable quality.

Hope its not any trouble, thanks. 