User talk:Irskaad/Archive 4

RE:Object U
I have added to the page. If you go there, you can see the general obstacles and how to use the machine. They seem pretty straitforward to me, but if you have any issues understand it, just ask and I'll clarify.

Mastermachine Be a friend, save a life. Only through peace will peace be achieved 14:28, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Finished :D
That's great! The only thing I see that wouldn't be something the Machine can do is when he talks to his sister. The machine can only show things that happened, and of course, the alternative when they face up the obstacles. It wouldn't be able to let Kies talk to his sister, as cool an idea as that is. However, it could let him look back and relive her life again, to remember her better. As much as I wish they could make their peace, that will need some other story or device to allow it. Sorry. Besides that, however, it was a very good bit of writing!

Mastermachine Be a friend, save a life. 16:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Innoin
Yeah, sure, do what you want with it. EDIT: Oops, signature... 21:18, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Second Bunsen War
Yo, Irskaad, I'd thought I'd tell you that there's a Second Bunsen War going if you didn't know. The war starts soon, so I'm just gathering some last-minute participants before it's too late to join :P

Tahar and the AI
Okay, I have started and provided a backstory to the Taharian AI that we were going to write together. It is here. At the moment, my current thinking is that it reveals secrets of the Kraw Galaxy's history, supporting your AllMind fiction you are developing, but also, the AI was invented by the Hrezi Federation as their last dwindling legacy of their former brilliance, it contains the information of an advanced empire which could boost the Kraw galaxy in times to come. I guess you could invent or get one or more of your Tahar characters who make contact with the AI, luckily, it won't mind other lifeforms. Wormulon  Talk to me  01:32, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks!
Thank you Irksadd for responding to my blog post! I want to take everyone's ideas of favorite creations and mash the ideas together. Thanks for helping me, again! -Starwanderer 18:52, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Why I'm against cleanslating
We have cnsidered your arguments, and here's the answers:

To the argument of it being wasted, as Ghl said, nothing's wasted; it'll still be a record of it and everything that's happened, and will carry on to a full, more organized fiction universe. Essentially retconning & resolving would be more likely to get rid of old work with its amount of chagnes.

And with the galaxies thing... as Ghelae said, both a sector of a galaxy (let alone mega galaxy) and a galxy are so ridiculously huge you couldn't fill the entire thing even if you tried; it's much larger than on Spore (spore has 100,000 stars, compared to real world 800 or something billion stars), so that's not a problem.

And here's a discussion for ya: [21:03]  Spacelike events [21:04]  Time beinding due to gravity or vspeed of the observer realtive to one another [21:04]  I one part of the universe, the Eartyh hasn't formed yet [21:04]  Dinner, see you soon, Jo, reply to me on my talkpage. [21:04]  in another, the universe is reaching degeneracy [21:04] <@Technobliterator> Irskaad: i amm [21:04]  Its complicated but its called a spacelike event [21:05] == OluapPlayer [c8d77378@gateway/web/freenode/ip.200.215.115.120] has joined #sporewiki [21:05] == mode/#sporewiki [+o OluapPlayer] by ChanServ [21:05]  Plus, there is time perception [21:05]  and alien calenders [21:05] <@OluapPlayer> I have adde neutral and bad relations to the Drac relations page [21:05] == Um2k9 [56285642@gateway/web/freenode/ip.86.40.86.66] has joined #sporewiki [21:05]  these three things mean I'm not bothered about any sort of universal timeline [21:06] == Moranosaurus [562eb80e@gateway/web/freenode/ip.86.46.184.14] has quit [Ping timeout: 252 seconds] [21:06] <@Technobliterator> OluapPlayer: cool [21:06]  So fictions can still be finished after the oscleanslate [21:06] <@OluapPlayer> Now it's time to add the enemies [21:06]  What I don't see is why long wars can't continue somewhere else [21:07]  It's not like you've planned 100% of the entire war [21:07]  Yes I have. [21:07]  -_- [21:07]  in short. the worry about it interfering with other fictions is not a problem So no, it won't interfer with a thing. Nexidium coins? There's a satellite for that. Ottzello for Gyronic? Wel the Taldar made part of th galaxy.

As for wiki like a dictatorship, well we're not doing that. We're giving users the option to have a personal universe, anyway, but not just that. If we're making a collaboritive universe and we let people go all willy-nilly and overruse things etc, then the collaborative universe turns from a fiction to a mess. We need to have some rules and restrictions, or it won't work. The fiction universe is still in developing, this is just a part of the development.

I have no clue wha the divine thing has to do with the wiki anyway. Whether it was some extremely powerful race or a race of demons destroying it, there's no difference.-- 20:12, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Incoming Transmission from the Confederacy of Allied Systems
''Good evening, Commander Tyko and a plentiful day to you. We are intrigued by your nation and its exploits in your distant area of the universe. In regard to your question, the Confederacy is a huge alliance of like-minded empire banded together to bring choas to order in the Cyrannus Galaxy by overthrowing the corrupt rule of the United Republic of Cyrannus. We would be glad to join you in an alliance if you accept!''

Chancellor Dasá of the Confederacy of Allied Systems

''We are glad you have accepted our alliance, and we are sure it will last for quite a while indeed. The United Republic of Cyrannus has long ignored the plight of the weak, the poor and of the disadvantaged, instead focusing on building up fleets and constructing gigantic structures, when their people have been suffering. The URC has many members, though the main species are the Libertus, the Draken, the Adelphi and the D'annaoi. Our great Confederacy was formed mainly by the strong and mighty Mortalitas Empire, but in time many races joined our growing union, such as many Libertus, Trucinex, Basileus and Yadumaran. We hope you have found this information interesting. ''

-Chancellor Dasá of the Confederacy of Allied Systems

Asgord Genocide
Can one of my empires (The Homa Derquia Empire) join the Asgord Genocide and kill Asgord? Please reply

Jaredian 15:24, May 30, 2011 (UTC)User:JaredianJaredian 15:24, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Incoming Transmission (FRA)
"Are we enjoying our destruction? I haven't communicated with you mortal sacks of stupid for quite some time. Just be comfortable with the fact that you and your children will be tied to pikes and your guts will be pulled out of your ears while you're still alive. *Flesh ripping sounds in the background, Asgord screaming*"

- Warlord Hez'Kalka

Xho --  Error Found. Consider Death.  15:05, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

The Great Deisna War
Since said war has not started, I'll make a story of the Sangrian Resistance stealing the mineral and giving it to your nation, okay? 21:07, May 31, 2011 (UTC)


 * Don't expect it to be done immediately, I'm doing some important work for the wiki. 05:58, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

"Well...you harassed many of my highest guards, tried to give one a hug, and fail to understand that the universe DOES NOT LIKE YOU. AT ALL. I'll see to it that your souls find the gates to Hell."

- Warlord Hez'Kalka

Xho --  Error Found. Consider Death.  21:47, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

"Awwwww...don't worry...I'LL MOUNT YOUR SKELETON TO A WALL."

- Hez'Kalka Xho --  Error Found. Consider Death.  13:01, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

"Well make friends with the demons in Hell."

- Hez

Xho --  Error Found. Consider Death.  15:06, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

"THAT WAS A JOKE YOU STUPID WOMAN"

- Hez'Kalka

Xho --  Error Found. Consider Death.  15:13, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

"*Tuuros disappears from sight :D*"

Xho --  Error Found. Consider Death.

Transmission From Shillite Political Directorate Code:1990.0987.3300.4548,
Greetings from Sancti Imperium Shillus Primus Nihilis, the empire of the great god Nihl in this galaxy. It seems the kraw wish to know of our empire, very well. The Shilltie Empire is a military oligarchy/theocracy with three branches fo governemnt, a legislative, executive and judicial. Each branch has three sub-branches (e.g. the Judicial Branch has the Inquisition, the Courts and the National Police.) The Shillite Empire is ultimately dedicated to spreading the religion of Nihl throughout the universe, in the way of universal affairs they are somewhat unlearned and sit amongst an island of ignorance in a sea of knowledge, thusly are somewhat naive in thinking all the universe shall fall under the sway of Nihl's religion. Shillites are neutral evil. And that about covers it. (Shillite society on an individual planet is feudalism, as the majority of the empire is made up of slaves or serfs.)-Imperator Dekk'Setph--The Archemporer 17:10, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds excellent, ally, we shall begin sending relief supplies and slaves to beign rebuilding your empire, then our alliance shall gain momentum.-Imperator Dekk'Setph--The Archemporer 17:18, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

New Sig Test
Irskaad - Talk to me - Halloway, United, Free, and Awesome. - Date and Time: 12:41, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

The Yotunians and their tier
I think the Yotunians qualify as a Tier 4 civilization. When I mean relativistic travel, I am referring to time dilation. As a ship approaches the speed of light, time onboard the ship slows down (just enough so the light barrier isn't broken). This means that if a ship travelled for 50 years at very close to the speed of light time slows down immensely, one could circumnavigate the known universe in a life time. But the unfortunate thing, is that by the time you got back to Earth, billions of years would have passed, to quote from Carl Sagan "To travel fast in space, is to travel fast into the future".

What does this mean for the Yotunians? Well it means they can have a fairly spread out empire, however each colony would be mostly out of contact (unbless their empire is clustered close together they could communicate with the homeworld with some lets say 15 year time delay if their colony if 15 light years away). many scientists speculate whether STL civilizations are the most likely to exist. However, this would rate the Yotuninans Tier 4 and due to the energy harnessing we have talked about, they would probably rate Kardashev 0.

This of course, isn't really a problem for the Yotunians, their ships can time dilate, adnd it also makes them very different to most races of the SporeWikiverse, and it also makes their colonies perhaps easier to hiude from potential threats and spreads their species across the future. Wormulon  Talk to me  21:53, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Response from the Saronway
About the hell thing, many of us believe so. Not all of us, though. "- PM Arnella Reana Felrendoa"

- Imperios  -   We are eternal...  16:55, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Innoin
megannis no longer exists so the planet in it must be tweaked to be someware else.--Twink talk to me we all have a minute to learn a lifetime of disaster. 17:59, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

ok also the war wont continue untill you write something im done with the shellious section of that part now its your turn.--Twink talk to me we all have a minute to learn a lifetime of disaster. 18:25, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Since the Genocide is just about over...
As I said, I'm planning a fiction involving the Tahars. It's intended to give people a bit of an idea as to how the Iron Systems Federation functions on an individual level, instead of how they function as a part of the Council of Blades.

Basically, the fiction involves a Tahar (may or may not be Echo- your call) intercepting a distress signal from an as-yet unknown alien. He heads to the origin of the signal (a planetoid or smaller), but is ambushed by pirates (or Iteok/any other enemies you can think of). He is forced to crash-land his ship on the surface of the planet, which turns out to be a massive junkyard. Also on the planet is an Initiate Paladin of the Iron Systems Federation (meaning he doesn't have his armor), and since the pirates are combing the planet to find them, the two have to use their collective technological skill to not only slow down their pursuers but get off the rock.

It's really just a bit of fun, it certainly isn't serious in storyline or intention, it's basically just to make some good fiction with the other great writers in this wiki. And, as I said, to introduce one of my new fictions to the wiki.

As always, any suggestions are fully welcome.

-This message by Spriggs077, a.k.a. AGrumpyPanda 07:05, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Incoming transmission from the Saronway
"We've grew tired of Halloway leadership slipping their ideas, their goals, their culture in our land. We want to live in land of cultured and faithful, and Halloway tries to destroy our culture and replace it with their own - by their products, their TV, their mass-media. We wanted independence. And we gained it."

- PM Felrendoa

Kraxia
Here it is. - CB11

GDW
I was giving the mineral to Halloway, right? 03:54, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Fiction
O.K., I'm good to start when you are, I just need to think up a good name. Also, I'll let you write the prologue, since my character shows up a little after the Tahar crashes. -This message by Spriggs077, a.k.a. AGrumpyPanda 12:17, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Name
O.K., I've honestly got no idea what to call it... Once I've got a name I'm all good to start the thing, any suggestions? -This message by Spriggs077, a.k.a. AGrumpyPanda 12:00, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

A Final Asgord Genocide Story
Hello, Irsk. Me and Matt were having a conversation on IRC some time ago, and I discussed with him an idea for the last TIAF story in the Asgord Genocide. I need your opinion on it before it can be added, though.

The basic premise is that Admiral Tanyan secretly visits Kane'es after the Tralor devastated it, and finds one surviving Asgord. She takes it home to the TIAF, and the TIAF decides to secretly keep the Asgord safe, as part of "cultural preservation" (the TIAF doesn't like to see species nor cultures go extinct). "The last FRA Asgord" could then be a plot point in future stories (and will be the excuse for Matt's fiction to join the Second Bunsen War).

I don't know if you wanted all of the FRA's to get killed, though this was just an idea that could bring a satisfying end to the Asgord Genocide: a story that, for once, doesn't involve the Asgord getting their butts whooped.

Awesome. Though it appears that the story already ended with the TAE absorbing the rest of the FRA, maybe the Last Asgord is sort of a twist ending?

Well slap me, stab me and hang me off a bridge...
... that made no sense did it? Feeling really stupid right now... Yeah, that works quite nicely. I'll get to work on the page now. -This message by Spriggs077, a.k.a. AGrumpyPanda 12:03, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Final battle
hey would you mind hepingme with the final battle in the war for wental i can't write it myself and its really hard--Twink talk to me we all have a minute to learn a lifetime of disaster. 21:01, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

currently my head isempty and i don't know what to do after the iteok fleet is reaveled to be coming while jarica is alive and edoshai joins the fight while growing rvalry with toragh-9 in his cell while they insult eachother. i don't know what to add next to start off the next part of the final battle. like captaintybunsen im in a writer's block.--Twink talk to me we all have a minute to learn a lifetime of disaster. 21:05, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Dragonian messenger ship
Greetings Tahar Empire we used to be a warmongering race until we realized the foolishness that was right now we prefer terraforming the worlds we devastated in our wars and guiding primitive races and helping our former enemies.we also try to convince other warrior races to stop their path and be like us

Incoming Transmission - New Pepis Empire
(Note - IRC thing was TOTALLY non-canon) Greetings, FKA. I am King Peptain, leader of the Pepis. We are impresed that you have FINALLY re-found your race's predatory aspects, and will help you. Do you accept an alliance? - CB11

Uh... who are you talking about? (I listed in the Facts that these are NOT the Pepis from "2 years ago". I couldn't think of a good name) - CB11

Stranded
O.K., I did my part of chapter 1. I'm thinking the two meet in say, chapter 3 so they both get an opportunity to explore for a bit. I've kept my character's identity hidden for now, it'll be revealed once the two meet. I figured it was appropriate since everyone knows the Tahars but nobody really knows the ISF yet.

Anyway, I tried to avoid making it sound like my character has too much kit, but let me know if you think he sounds like he as too much. In essence he has a pistol and a set of mechanical tools, and his drone has a couple of tools that can be used as weapons, so he doesn't have that much. As always, let me know what you think!

-This message by Spriggs077, a.k.a. AGrumpyPanda 04:28, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 2
What I'm thinking is chapter 1 is a bit of an introduction, the two characters just being introduced and given a basic summary (i.e. who they are, what they do, what they have on them e.t.c.), chapter 2 gives them a chance to explore the area a bit. I suppose in the Tahars' case this would be him starting to make his way to the signal (the fake one planted by the Iteok) and possibly encountering a couple of pirates, just so that the story gets moving before the characters meet. -This message by Spriggs077, a.k.a. AGrumpyPanda 04:56, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

When are you adding your part to chapter 1? -This message by Spriggs077, a.k.a. AGrumpyPanda 06:07, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Machina?
Meh... haven't really done much wiki related in the past few days, and I was playing a cool game clled the "Setlers:Rise of an Empire" (beat it and started again), so I wasn't really on the net that much either. Probably still won't be, I have a major fish problem to take care of, lost 5 fish over the weekend, no idea why. So I'll be busy for the morning, probably, trying to figure out what went wrong. MasterMachine -Be a Friend, Save a Life- 12:29, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

PS: I also don't want to meet Catface again... he's making me depressed by his absolute refusal to A)talk to me politly, B)accept my apolagy, and C)at least pretend to want to get past this. So, yea, I probably won't be on the IRC much anymore... MasterMachine -Be a Friend, Save a Life- 12:32, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

"Poor you"? Wow, you totally care XD So, did I lose you at the fish or the game part? XD XD Anyway, on to the flags. Those are PERFECT! Just gotta up my number from 21 to 24... XD You really cheered me up (which is weird, cause you acted like you didn't care), thanks! And thanks for the flags, Irskaad, you're the best. (Don't tell Twinky XD) MasterMachine -Be a Friend, Save a Life- 13:00, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and the cloud flag is for the Ravir Standing Republic, or RSR. MasterMachine -Be a Friend, Save a Life- 13:25, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

E-Mail?
Doy uo have an e-mail. If so, could you send the name to me?

Religion
Also, I completed (with generator help) an idea for the religion in our fiction world.


 * Type: monotheism (moderately matriarchal)
 * Focus: good deeds


 * Deity: The Goddess of Peace
 * Titles: The Calm One, The First


 * Divine Interaction: in response to most prayers


 * Afterlife: is incomprehensible to the living and can be reached by the living, with effort
 * Supernatural: demons (evil's minions), monsters, mischievious spirits


 * Worship: praying
 * Holidays: often
 * Holidays Celebrate: saints, prophets, the harvest, historical events, great rulers, martyrs
 * Major Holiday(s): are very joyous times


 * Clergy: both genders


 * Symbol: is a 23-pointed star inside a circle
 * Holy Color: none
 * Passed Down: via a holy book with commentary


 * Deadly Sins: gluttony and sloth
 * High Virtues: none


 * Coming of Age: 18 years old
 * Coming of Age Rite: involves a test of strength/agility


 * Marriage: is arranged by families
 * Marriage Rites: involve much gift-giving


 * Death Rites: involve dividing up the deceased's property


 * Major Taboo: overeating


 * Prevalence: believed by many
 * Outsiders: are forced into hiding

Just wanted to tell you. - CB11

I'm back!
Hey Irskaad, look who's back? Me! It's been a long time friend, what have u been doing on ur fictions, huh? I'd love to know! (BTW, this is BNSCLeader, I just have a new account called BNSCommander, bcuz the name makes more sense.)  BNSCommander  -  Talk Channel  20:56, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

What about the Kraw Empire? What happened to them? BNSCommander -  Talk Channel  21:09, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Stranded
O.K., I'm back. I did my part of chapter 2, so feel free to add at your leasure. -This message by Spriggs077, a.k.a. AGrumpyPanda 09:38, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Stranded
Just wondering when you'll be getting on with chapter 2. If you're busy then fair enough, I'm just asking. -This message by Spriggs077, a.k.a. AGrumpyPanda 07:01, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Irskaad...
Look Irskaad, it's not because I got CoD, it's because real-life. I've a tough life. Here is the list of happenings before school ended :

1. I've become friends with a Filipino but he started to act weird around me and only me, because I acted weird around people when I'm nervous, so we're no longer friends and I'm having problems so I started a new attitude.

2. People don't like me.

There, and I don't care if Xho bans me, I care less. BNSCommander -  Talk Channel  22:13, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Coding for Generator
Paste this code to notepad, save as .html. - CB11

 function single(stuff) { var stuffx = Math.floor(Math.random * stuff.length) document.write(stuff[stuffx]) }

function curve(stuff) { var stuffz = Math.floor(Math.random * stuff.length) var stuffx = Math.floor(Math.random * stuff.length) var stuffn = Math.floor((stuffz+stuffx)/2) document.write(stuff[stuffn]) }

function multiple(stuff,b,a) { i = 0 var n = Math.floor(Math.random * (b-a+1))+a do { i++ var stuffx = Math.floor(Math.random * stuff.length) document.write(stuff[stuffx]) stuff.splice(stuffx,1) if (i < n-1) { document.write(", ") } else if (i < n) { document.write(" and ") } } while (i < n) } <script type="text/javascript"> var character1 = new Array character1[0] = 'Harek' character1[1] = 'Igmaia'

var character2 = new Array character2[0] = 'John' character2[1] = 'Mary'

var town = new Array town[0] = 'small village' town[1] = 'medium-sized village' town[2] = 'large village' town[3] = 'small town' town[4] = 'medium-sized town' town[5] = 'large town' town[6] = 'small city' town[7] = 'medium-sized city' town[8] = 'large city' town[9] = 'settlement' town[10] = 'small community' town[11] = 'large community' town[12] = 'community'

var country = new Array country[0] = 'Englos' country[1] = 'Maree' country[2] = 'Dwarfland' country[3] = 'unknown lands' country[4] = 'the mountains' country[5] = 'the hills' country[6] = 'the desert'

var problem = new Array problem[0] = 'are framed for a crime' problem[1] = 'are arrested for accidently committing a crime' problem[2] = 'witness a robbery' problem[3] = 'witness a murder' problem[4] = 'go into a bar and see a barfight' problem[5] = 'go into a cave' problem[6] = 'go into a dungeon' problem[7] = 'witness a revolt' problem[8] = 'see the king get assassinated' problem[9] = 'notice the guards are corrupt'

for (var n=0;n<25;n++) { document.write(" ") single(character1) document.write(" and  ") single(character2) document.write(" visit a  ") single(town) document.write(" in  ") single(country) document.write(" and  ") single(problem) document.write(" . ") document.write(" ") }

Get online
Irskaad get on irc right now :/-- 11:36, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

To Kraw Empire
''Well, hello, Kraw, it has been a while since we last talked. We are looking to establish a good foundation among the Kraw Galaxy's natives, and being one of their leading nations, you were an obvious choice for an alliance. Which brings me to the point: We would like to become allies with your nation. I'm sure we are on friendly terms; if not, there won't be any repercussions from rejected our friendship. Just know that an alliance with us could mean loads of benefits... Some that you'll surely need after the Asgord Genocide and Annihilation. Send your response swiftly.'' -Captain Lorrelas of the TIAF

To Tahar Imperium
''Salutations, Tahar Imperium. We are the TIAF, in case you forgot us, and we seek to forge an alliance with your great nation. Certainly, it would be wise to accept; we have one of the most powerful militaries in Kraw and have a vast industrial power. Not to be threatening... Though we could always ally the Iteok, and you wouldn't want that now, would you? Choose wisely. '-Admiral Khoffman of the TIAF

To True Asgord Empire
''Greetings, TAE, we are glad to see the Asgord race prospering in the aftermath of many recent Kraw Galaxy wars. Surely you'll need much support to build up your admittedly small empire. We can help bring that support. We would like to form an alliance with your empire, in the hopes that it will benefit both of our nations. We hope the alliance will prosper. '-Lieutenant Samenor of the TIAF

To Terridor Federation
''Greetings, Terridor Federation! You might know us already, but in case you forgot who we are, we'll just introduce ourselves again. We are the TIAF, a semi-militant nation like yours. We have been looking to find strong allies in Kraw, and your nation seems a much better option than your neighbor and friend, the Iteok. We would like to form an alliance with your nation, upon the terms that we would have immunity from an Iteok attack if something... happens. Send your response swiftly.'' -Captain Lorrelas of the TIAF

To Iteok Khereg
''Well, if it isn't the Iteok Khereg. Our relations certainly have been on a rollercoaster of a ride. First, your mindless slaughtering of the Wentals certainly ruined the TIAF public's opinion on your nation. Your help in the War of Wental helped a little, but you went right back to slaughtering our allies. What a shame. Such potential put to waste. We are nowhere close to declaring you an ally nor an enemy... But I will warn you right now that if you decide to antagonize us, it will be a joyous day for the Tahar. Farewell.'' -Lieutenant Samenor of the TIAF

Lol, the Iteok got left out :P

Kraw
"Hail, Empire of the Kraw Galaxy. We are the Wentals, a moderatly powerful empire from the Andromeda Galaxy. We have heard of you, and seek allies in Kraw for our eventual destruction and extinction of the Iteok Species. Would you like to be a part of that? We would like you to. We offer trade, tech, and military support in times of need. If you should accept our offer and form an alliance, we would be very greatful to you."

- Remlap of the Wentals

"Well... we cannot forgive the Iteok for starting the war between themselves and ourselves. They started it, and we intend to finish it. If you would like to help us take down their leader, we would not hesitate to accept the help, but know that our eventual goal is complete extinction of the species. Besides that, what of our offer? Are our anti-Iteok feelings going to prevent it from happening?"

- Remlap of the Wentals

"I can't say that my people will be all that disappointed. Many feel... okay, I'll be honest, almost all of us feel that an alliance would have ended badly and should have never been offered. But Dylan was insistent... Masuri will be happy. I suppose our next meeting will probably be on the battlefield."

- Remlap of the Wentals

KGGC
"Hail, Kraw Galaxy Groxic Colony, you are a Grox Branch Empire that broke off, as are our Wental Grox. They suggested we attempt to ally you, as they beleive you can aid us in the future. We will offer tech, trade, and military support when you need it. I do hope you accept our offer, as it would greatly further our anti-iteok campaign."

- Remlap of the Wentals

"To be honest, you can't. We aren't aggressive by nature, and we have always stood by our allies when they needed help. We just haven't had many allies. We can only offer you our word that we will not betray you, nothing more."

- Remlap of the Wentals

"That's great! We will not fail you, nor shall we betray you! I give you the word of the entire Wental Council, save Masuri, but he doesn't count, he's not a true member. Clank, of the Wental Grox, also wants to congratulate you for declaring independence from the Main Grox Empire."

- Remlap of the Wentals

MasterMachine -Sometimes there are no right choices- 14:51, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Stranded, Private Fiction Universe
Sorry it took so long, but I've started Chapter 4 of Stranded, so feel free to add your part any time.

Another thing I wanted to bring up is that I'm sort of planning to start a private fiction universe, intended to have a greater focus on human-alien interactions rather than alien-alien interactions. I'm thinking of creating an entirely new race for this, sort of psychic humanoid space-octopuses, and using a more twenty-first century feel human race (i.e., essentially the same tech we have now, just a bit more refined). Anyway, I was just wondering if you were at all interested in joining. I'm not planning to have too many people join in, probably only 3-4 at the most. You don't have to create a completely new creature if you don't want to, but it might be a chance to break out of the Kraw Galaxy stereotype (that's what I'm doing anyway).

-This message by Spriggs077, a.k.a. AGrumpyPanda 07:05, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I will be at school a lot
Sorry, but the fiction will continue soon. Welcome to the PEN. Enjoy your stay at one of our Shipyard Hotels. 11:53, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Incoming transmission
Hello to anyone who receives this message, this is lord zeta the great of the nova alliance. We are commencing a massive build up of our arsenal and our fleet. We have awoken from a cryogenic sleep after traveling through a wormhole to your universe (we don't know how this happened) and after a run in with a fleet of roving raiders, we have learned we need better weapons. I will be glad to open a trade route with you, receiver. Please respond