Fiction talk:In Better Times

Chapter 3 Plan
Sequence of Events (draft)


 * Hel' and Ramashe walk from Phase Relay to AG skiff, military parade going on either side.
 * Skiff passes through market, Ramashe notes large number of weapons on sale, Hel' points out that weapons are 'for tourists,' and would be useless in a combat situation.
 * Skiff passes by Guild halls, Hel' briefly explains the Guild system.
 * Pass over Fordan Residential Sector, Ramashe remarks on how most people forget that Fordanta have a normal life outside the battlefield.
 * Ramashe looks up, gets startled by appearance of Void Space.
 * Arrive at Hotel spire, awkward moment where Ramashe is only person on table with fruit/vegetables, Hel' mentions Fordan inability to eat fruit.
 * Mention that next location is the equatorial archipelago.

-This message by Spriggs077, a.k.a. AGrumpyPanda 08:01, November 24, 2011 (UTC)