Thread:Gorzill/@comment-4001163-20141214171944/@comment-5496489-20150103222204

Hmmm, I still need Niyra to suffer from water poisoning and Nara to provide the necessary medical attention. Nara will still become hostile towards the guild and threaten to take custody of Niyra away from the Guild(which she can do as Niyra's Admiral and legal guardian) if another event like this happens. This increase in tension as well as Niyra and the other cadets feeling marginalized will be important plot points for when the creatures unleashed by Torackix from the Persacron artifact show up.

I should probably tell what I had in mind. After the The Treasure Within Niyra, who is just about had it, runs off, but begins to suffer from a illusion until Nara arrives and frees her from it. The two are then attacked by one of the creatures, but mange to kill it. They ten hear that the Guild base is under attack and rush back to help fend off the creatures. Afterwards a very heated debate is kicked up between the Guild members(who think the creatures are just an undiscovered life form and want to study them) and Nara and Hydarax(who think the creatures are new kind Darkling demon and want to exterminate them). Niyra frustrated at their indecisiveness argues that the cadets should go take down the creatures themselves, convincing(at least) most of them who feel marginalized themselves to join her, citing the time they took down the Kumakirii as proof that they can handle this. Niyra than makes a plan to take three or two members from each team to fight the creatures while the other stay behind and guard the base. Niyra and the ones going with her head out and end up getting attacked by the creatures. It does not go well with Makoro witnessing Niyra getting devoured by one of the creatures. Jallas recovers Makoro but the cadets are loosing against the creatures. just when their about to go completely down for the count Niyra in her Ryu Form appears(not known to be her at the moment) and destroys the creatures. However the Ryu Form gets too badly damaged and Niyra emerges from it in third stage form much to the surprise of everyone else.

Taken back to the base Niyra is put under quarantine with most of the Guild members fearing her, as she ain't found of them(and they know it) and now she can generate a 22 meter dragon around herself that could easily squash them. Winning the argument Nara agrees to lead a group of the other cadets against the creatures while some others stay behind in order to defend Niyra. This will allow us to develop so of the cadets who haven't received as much attention more, while still continuing to develop the ones who have.

If any of you have any thoughts or suggestions feel free to give them.