Thread:Glaven The Outcast/@comment-26181644-20150427020741

I have some suggestions for him:

1) Try to add an alien name. It will look more fiction-like.

2) Add these things and work on them to expand your fiction or it will be deleted:


 * History - This can include early and later lives.


 * Abilities - meaning what the character can do.


 * Appearance - meaning what the character looks like


 * Relations - meaning the characters relations with others


 * Quotes from others - the spot where other characters say something about him


 * Trivia - the spot where you add some other info. 