Thread:GreatDestroyer12/@comment-5714344-20121118215917

I've edited together a version of out latest RP.

Should I post it or do you want to make you own version?

The only thing I've altered of substance is that, in this edition, the shepherds escape. I altered it because I believe I can tell an interesting story if the integration of the evacuated persons into the Galactic society, more so at least than just blowing them up would improve this. but I can change it back if I simply must. 