Thread:Metashadow555/@comment-4864622-20120915233421/@comment-2081141-20120916001924

It generally just needs more detail. One thing that I should point out, though, is that you don't need to follow SPORE gameplay explicitly. Evolution is largely implied in basically all our fiction, so there's no need to feel like you have to adhere to a set of very simplistic 'stages.'

The only part of the fiction that irks me is that you claim they have no cellular origin. After talking with multiple other users, I assume you mean they didn't have an origin in the cell stage, however this is not a very reasonable perspective of how life would originate (simple molecules -> single celled organism -> complex organism), so you'l have to pay attention to how you word that.

You're allowed to create whatever you want, and we're quite liberal with science around here, so don't feel stuck with 'human' science, but we would still appreciate a decent explanation.