Thread:DensityStar/@comment-24941009-20180628090453/@comment-24941009-20180708071613

Yes, it's fine. The only issue is the encounter with Quasar, when The Beast just bites him and leaves, instead of trapping him with its jaw. Although I guess The Beast could have been young and lacked experience at the time (otherwise some creatures would have already been descended before the Solarieans arrived).

There's also the "I will feed", but it doesn't really matter since it's just a hallucination.

So, another thing. May I use some quotes from the story for the Stygilax page?