Fiction talk:The Zarbania Powers/Project Helix

The science
I don't mean to be outwardly critical here but looking at what you've done initially, I have one or two things to suggest.

"Project:Helix is the Science Command's project to take fertilized space pirate embryos, and attempt to infuse them with energy, and essence,

Unless you're infusing embryos with the odder energies like Entropic or Demonic, this wouldn't really do anything. Use of Elemental Energy - the kind that most people use and is essentially the quintessential mortal-used essence - is a quality that's trained, all sapiens born with it, but not to the extent where they can perform extra-sensory stuff. That involves training.

...or you might be using your own kind of energy that you made up, its not 100% clear. And for the record, i'm trying to help.--Monet47 - "Immortality is an elusive thing" 01:02, January 19, 2014 (UTC)