Thread:Yakkorinio/@comment-35189567-20181126094355/@comment-37351627-20181127145901

Kreesident wrote: Well, I can already see various problems with your fiction, a ton actually. For example, the military uses Spore's system of a military which is extremely simplified compared with realistic sci-fi examples. We here in the Fiction Universe prefer more realistic military stats and fleets, we don't make our fleets have like one type of ship, but multiple ship classes for different purposes. That's just one of many problems with the page but I won't get into those.

And by the way if you're looking for a place to start collaborations with other users as well as get some more criticisms with your fiction, I recommend you join our Discord server.

https://discord.gg/fXG7ywP I believe I should shorten some unnecessary headings and parts such as "History" and remove anything related to "lollololol if u do this they do that". As for the military, I believe the Grubmolians (with their somewhat diplomatic ways) would choose to have simple classes of Cargo, (Spice trade, what not) Scout, Heavy, and possibly a sniper or a large carrier that can deploy those massive machines I wrote about in small numbers. The military and technology are the weakest in my opinion.