User talk:Irskaad

Again, welcome! -- Wormulon (Talk) 14:22, July 27, 2010

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I don't know if that Sentence was Automatic or Not, but thanks anyway. =)

Intro
Welcome to my Talk Page. This is the Page where you get to Interact with me.

Though this Talk page is a Bit Diffrent from the Rest. Not only can you Talk to me, but you can target your message to all 4 of the Major Races of my Fictional Galaxy, the Kraw Galaxy. (Like an Incoming Transmission).

There are 5 possible targets your messages can Target:

Me - I will try to answer your messages the best way I can. If you have Criticism, Tell me, and I will fix it. The Kraw Empire - Calm, and an Helpful Race. They are very Humble. The Asgord Empire - Friendly and Beautiful, they like talking to new People. They will be nuts to ally your Empire, no matter if they're Evil or not. The Iteok Empire - Warmongers who like to Brag about how strong they are. They may Declare Immediate war on you. The Tahar Empire - A Neutral, Intelligent Species. They are well-Connected to the Kraw.

Here's an Example:

Incoming Example Transmission from xxxxx - Target: Iteok Empire
You Iteok are so full of Yourselves, you should Die!

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Images
Heres some Images i though you could find Useful!

Hope you like them! 09:19, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

These Images are Amazing, Thanks!

Irskaad 09:29, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Hey
Hey I read a part of the encouter (part 01) and I wanted to let you know I really like it and is well written. Also the species you have made are very well written en detailed and it was fun to read.

Looking forward to more Encounter stories :D Dinoman82 16:50, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you very much! This is why I chose to make 4 Species rather than Just 1. Many Stories can be made about 4 Empires. Irskaad 16:51, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

PS: How far have you Read?

Hey, yes you are right about that. 4 species make a way better and interessting story, since there is more at stake then. I read till Meanwhile at Ikrhas and it said to await part 2. Also very nice detailed with all that year numbers.

Although I had a question about one of your species, about the Tahar and there "Virtwaalas Kataliem" sport, do they have competitions for it etc? Like a champions league etc?   Greetz Dinoman82 16:58, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

There is an Inter-Planetary League, and Terkom and Telkom are the Main Winners. Irskaad 16:59, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, that is very cool to know :D Again, looking forward to the part 2. Dinoman82 17:10, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Hi!
I see you're a new user here. Welcome! I'm Maxi6, and if you need any help, just come ask me and I'll see what I can do. I hope you enjoy your time here! Maxi6 ( Speaketh! ) 14:12, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I am sorta New, but I have been here for 6 Days. =D Irskaad 14:13, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Almost at your one week aniversary! :) Also, you may want to reply to messages on the other users talk page, so that they know they have new messages. Just a suggestion, but you don't have to. Maxi6 ( Speaketh! ) 14:18, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Your welcome! No problem. See you around! Maxi6 ( Speaketh! ) 14:24, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Overview
As you can see, the users here are very friendly. If you wish to ask them questions im sure they will answer them, if they can. I include myslef in this. Also if you wnat to customise the Tildes post just look on my talk page, their is instructions from liquid ink their. Lord  Humanfight   22  15:43, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Incoming Transmission - DCP Channel


-Kcch- ''Hello Commander Kies, welcome to our galaxy, the Milky Way. We have observed your empire, via automated nano Von Neumann probes, but have never established contact due to the several recent wars. We like your ideals, however, we use more force to ensure peace for us an our allies, but usually only on very agressive, hostile and dangerous empires, such as the Grox. We would gladly accept an alliance, and would like to learn more about your galaxy.'' -Kcch- --Admiral Horlin 19:54, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

To the Asgord
''Greetings, peoples of the Asgord, we are the Delpha Coalition of Planets, who come from the Milky Way, but inhabit a few other galaxies as well. The Kraw, an empire we have recently allied with as recommended us establishing First Contact with your empire. Our intention is to lern about this galaxy, and our aligment is lawful neutrality.'' --DCP Admiral

''Your species sounds like a fun one to be around with, one of our members, the Jarzo are much like you! We are glad you like us an we accept an alliance!'' --DCP Admiral

To the Tahars
''Greetings, Tahar empire, this is the Delpha Coalition of Planets from the Milky Way, we have heard that you are capable of Intergalactic travel, so you may know of our galaxy. Our intentions is to learn about your galaxy, and the Kraw have recommended that we establish First Contact with your empire. We are lawful neutral, and our intentions is to learn about your galaxy.'' --DCP Admiral

''Your empire sounds very great too, so we accept an alliance! Meanwhile, we fight for order, if hostile empires threaten us or our allie's peace, who don't respond nicely to kind words, then we use force.'' --DCP Admiral 22:11, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

You might want to join the Light and Dark fiction with the Kraw, it isn't a major war, but whether you would like them to join in so soon is up to you. Wormulon  Talk to me  20:57, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Question
Hey, I was just wondering, why do you capitalize seemingly random words in the middle of sentences? Please don't be offended, I'm just curious. Maxi6 ( Speaketh! ) 02:21, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

I Have no Idea at All, You can say I'm Used to it, though I only do this on Computers. Irskaad 10:03, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

Congratulations!
Spriggs077 here! You're really coming along well with this! Your fiction is very well written and you don't seem to be mixing your four races up. You're certainly turning out to be someone to watch, who knows how far you could end up with the Kraw galaxy. You never know, the Kraw might be the next Xhodocto :D Spriggs077 11:27, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

Neither of these 4 Races are the Next Xhodocto. Perhaps in 2 months, I'll make a 5th Race who are like them, created due to a Horribly gone wrong Experiment in the Tahar Empire. And No, none of the Major 4 will be Extinct. This is just an Idea.

PS: Thanks! Have you Read the Encounter? If so, what was your Favourite Part? Irskaad 11:30, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

PSS: Sorry for not Replying in your Page, LOL. Also, you spelled Congratulations wrong. Irskaad 11:32, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

Indeed I did, and I believe its PPS (post post-script) not PSS. And I was kinda joking about the xhodocto bit. Anyway, I like the whole thing. Just let me know if you want help writing the battle scenes, I'm fairly good at that sort of thing.

By the way, I was just thinking about something. The Fordanta are constantly searching for pieces of Archeotech left behind by Those Who Came Before. I was planning on writing up a story in which one of these pieces is found in the Kraw Galaxy, detailing the various measures the Fordanta go to to secure it (that wasn't a typo), eventually ending up with the Fordanta allying with the four species. It's just an idea you should think about. Spriggs077 11:42, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

It is a Good Idea, but:

- The Fordans have to be VERY Persuasive to ally the Iteok, as they are Warmongers. - I Wonder how acquiring an Artefact would cause Alliances...

Irskaad 11:46, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

All military forces have respect for military prowess. Witnessing the power of the Fordanta and seeing their technological might firsthand would be enough to convince most to ally. As to the second point, maybe another alien race (I made a heap I can use) tries to take the piece, planning to wipe out the Kraw Galaxy races in the process, but the Fordanta help out. In thanks, the Kraw Empire (or whoever has the archeotech) gives the piece to them as a gift of friendship.Spriggs077 11:55, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, Good Idea. So, how and when do we start writing this (Soon to be) Awesome Fiction?

NOTE: The Asgord may or WILL try to Ally the Race that is trying to wipe out the Kraw Galaxy, Because of their Ridiculous Friendship Policies. Irskaad 12:00, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

The Void Star
I already have the twelve pieces of tech planned, I just needed to find other fictions to have the Archeotech as a way of the Fordanta meeting them. The piece that surfaces in the Kraw Galaxy is the Void Star, a weapon similar to a Lightning Striker or a Fordan Warblade, that exists both in Void Space and Real Space at the same time, allowing it to penetrate any material. Naturally the Iteok claim it as their own, being the military race (I will accept your council on this if you disagree), and their bragging about their awesome new weapon attracts the Lanian Empire. I'll let you write up how the Kraw Galaxy races fight the Lanians, but they slowly lose, as the Lanians are much larger and mroe powerful.

Hearing about the new device found, the Fordan Captain Ja'Dan Fleetfather investigates. Finding that the Void Star is indeed a piece of Archeotech, he summons the Kin-group that accompanied himself and Hel'Bre'K during the Jarzo Assault. With these veterans of war at the spearhead, the Kraw races push back the Lanian Empire and secure a peace treaty. In exchange for their services, the Iteok give Ja'Dan the Void Star and an alliance is created.

Phew, that was a long message. Any suggestions you have are more than welcome. Here's to a great fiction!Spriggs077 12:10, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the Iteok could Use the Void Star to Blow some of the Kraw Turrets that Surround their Empire (See the Encounter) and then Start threatening Empires Again. They Start Conquering Killing other Races again, but the Kraw Start another war with the Iteok, with the Kraw Losing, and then, that's when the Lanians show up.

Also, I have an Idea for the End. Since the Iteok don't want to lose any of their Power, their Commander, Zavrhos initially doesn't give the Void Star, but Toragh 9, their Emperor, will Disagree, and he will Himself give the Void Star to the Fordanians, and Ally them. Toragh 9 does this for their Inter-Galactic Travel Tech, so they can kill in other Galaxies.

Yes, here's to a Great Fiction! Irskaad 12:25, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

O.K., I've started on the Fiction, here's the link. I'm getting off for the night. Talk to you again, Spriggs077 12:33, August 3, 2010 (UTC)