Fiction talk:Vyro'Narza

Do you not think you are overdoing the Taldar a tad. (By a tad I mean alot) I am not being mean but the page is incredible unrealistic and appears to be full of itself. I am sorry to say but I think the Xhodocto are far better in terms of fiction and believability. Perhaps you can improve it?

-Um2k9 21:03 25 April 2010 UTC