Thread:Zillafire101/@comment-4960835-20140119200145/@comment-4960835-20141030104125

Also, I'm thinking about remaking of the Enlighternment War. Maybe. There's a little bit too much focus on the battle for Ughandalore, and I'm thinking of mixing the discovery of Matrukoris to it.

Have the Multus Awake during the battle of Ughandalore, then have the Kashriinox do stuff, and have them defeated. The usual stuff, no need to rewrite these parts.

However, I'm mainly thinging about rewriting the end of the war. After the Kashriinox Station Battle, the allies think the war is won and go on making plans for the reation of the UAE. However, the Dark One pops in and takes over the newly-discovered Matrukoris in order to stop the formation of the UAE, owith would mess up his plans. Matrukoris is protected by a fleet of Zarbanians/IoW, and is covered in a shield of pure darkness were even the Multus can't get through. Thus they call in an old all: The Lightling Order, with managed to dissolve the shield. So the allies take their station back, and the Dark One gets imprisoned by the Koatria.

The IoW and the Zarbanians do more stuff in the beginning and the end. The beginning of the war is mainly about the precusors and their artefacts, alas the markers need to be expanded upon vastly (I've never managed to explain what they do), and maybe we also can get into the Persacon as well. Alas, at the start up until the battle for Ughandalore, it will consist of exploration mixed with war rather than an all-out one as it will be afterwards.

All in all, I left you guys basically fumbling in the Dark there, without much direction to go, and I feel that it's time to at least try and fix it.

I personally believe the Return of THEM also needs more battles in more places (it's basically only focussed on the final battle, namely the Battle of Matrukoris there, with botrhered me somewhat).