Thread:Patriot868/@comment-2081141-20121001112606/@comment-5394672-20121002013927

http://spore.wikia.com/wiki/Fiction:Kioskstrum_Collective - I based mine off of Imperios' Divinarium after he told me mine was unorganized. Try using his Divinarium or my empire to help you understand the layout of a page.

As for science... try to keep your fiction inside the realm of possibility. No 'white matter' or 'crystallized event horizon', thats just bullshit that isn't even possible in the fictionverse. Lower the tech an power level to an average Tier Level, preferably 3 or lower (with 0 being the strongest and 6 being the lowest I think). It's always wise to only use technologies you understand to a level, or that are generally understood by all people, so you don't have to explain it too much.

On military size... 5k ships isn't much to a Tier 0-2 empire, or even possibly a high Tier 3, but these kinds of empires don't even need that many ships, as one is just as effective. 1 ship from a Tier 2 Empire can wipe out an entire fleet of ships from a Tier 3, 4, or 5 empire with ease. Hell, it could probably wipe out the entire Tier 5 empire in a single blast. You need to understand that there are MASSIVE gaps between Tier Level in this fictionverse.

Now, as for the attitude... cool it buddy. If you can't handle this then you can't handle Sporewiki and should, for your own good, leave. You need to realize that the wiki has fiction guidelines and fiction standards. Your fiction meets neither of them, yet you are trying to get it involved in Collab Fiction. If you want to get involved in collab, you need to fix up your empire. Once you do, I will be happy to invite you to my current first collab on this wiki, where you can see that war isn't the only feature it has to offer :)

I wish you luck and good fortune on your trek through this wiki. Also, advice, don't yell at older users... I have a friend who did that, he's been driven off the wiki by pretty much everyone (from what he says). I would not suggest it.