Thread:Gorzill/@comment-4001163-20141214171944/@comment-4960835-20150118161744

Yes that's good, you ca write it, though I don't think Hydarax will be at the Guild. Also I was thinking Nara to go psychokinetic on Dou'Wi right after, Kinquod'scr stepping in between and being near-fatally wounded, then Dou'wi startting to cry before blasting Nara away with such sheer power that it leaves a hole in the wall. Dou'Wi is actually extremely strong essence-wise, though his almost Rad-Eater-like innocence keeps that in check.

Seeing Kinquod'scr sacrificing himself for the Guildmaster makes her snap out of the daydream, and she prompty stops Nara from causing futher harm, and leading to a brief friendship with the Guild Apprentices (this shatters again when Team Attraction shows up and is revealed to be far more popular than her, wich she sees as a betrayal of her newfound friendship to them).

Also, perhaps because Dou'Wi is so strong and has such innocence, what about him being nearly enhanced into a Rad-Eater in the past once, before he declinced the offer made by their top Psychokinetic to do so? That could strenghten Niyra's respect towards him.