Thread:Zillafire101/@comment-4242472-20130520110301

Sorry neither me, Imperios or Luc could answer your question it's a busy time for the three of us.

We did discuss your inclusion into Andromeda and I'll tell you now, from the sounds of it Imperios is neutral, Spriggs won't mind too much but Luc doesn't want any part to do with your stuff (Almost cloning Metroid's Space Pirates and the Mandalorians has put you out of favour with him). From what I can tell of your fictions I'd like to give you a heads-up:
 * New Dawn is primarily a non-war fiction. It's supposed to represent a time of relative peace for Andromeda so bringing in a faction that wants to eliminate the commonwealth in a holy war is inadviseable at present.
 * Also holy wars are something the likes to prevent which means war with the AGC will mean the Zarbanians will have two intergalactic organisations bearing down on them along with any allies the Commonwealth can bring with it. This is why it is more fun to make friends than enemies.
 * Andromeda already has a pirate confederacy owned by Spriggs077 who basically rule wild space with an iron fist (sorta). And are led by 5ft tall badass normal Jayraan Kaios. The fact they are one of the few forces that can stand up to the Draconid Imperium on their own shows how dangerous they are.
 * While it was a nice attempt at the species page, you did make a few blunders with the opening factfile. Physical strength can be mentioned elsewhere and is outlined in the classification.
 * "Physical characteristics" is primarily a list of key features about their appearence.
 * "Classification" uses Technobliterator's "unit type" system described here.

My key tip if you want to be popular in Andromeda: Put more of your own ideas into your fictions, find ways to set your fictions apart from their inspirations. You'll get shouted at less and to be quite honest, you do run the risk of getting told off for copyright infringement. 