Thread:Monet47/@comment-26387398-20160323222026/@comment-4242472-20160324015106

Hi Thunderlord.

While I do look forward to seeing the Virginian Confederation join the PAE, I think it might need a little more to it before it's fiction-ready. At the moment all there is aside from the infnobox data is a brief history you might need to confirm with Captain Tybusen.

What might be useful is a description of government, what society is like, the scope of their military and any particular devices the Confederation might have. If you need any help with what to write for these, merely ask.

Aside from that, joining the PAE is more like signing up to be a state of the United States. The Andromedan Light is a unified body, where every member state (aside from exarchates and too many of those might undermine what the PAE is) are components of a larger unified body. The administrative divisions of which are here, though given this is your first fiction I'd advise caution as this could limit your creative freedom but your choice. If you're looking for connections there's always the which isn't so demanding.