Thread:Cyrannian/@comment-5496489-20170102034953/@comment-1633483-20170821210832

Ooh very nice work on the story so far Zilla, you wrote Anteddy's dialogue very well indeed, and he's who I find it the most difficult to write for. As for its placement, it probably works best as a subpage of "Fiction:Second Great Cyrannus War/Escalation".