Thread:Spartian300/@comment-4001163-20131128033601/@comment-4001163-20131130182628

For starters, try generating some back story. The can't just be Tier 0 instantly. What purpose do they serve in your fiction?

I also see that you're trying to establish D'hora. If he is to join the next possible war, he must have valid reason. And if he's siding with the main heroes, he has to have built up some type of relationship with at least one of them.

My Characters (who seem to make up the bulk of the heroes):

King Brygon - Current ruler of the Volver Empire

Queen Si'daal - Current ruler of the Antroth Empire

King Lavern- Current ruler of the Lavatufts.

General Oskel Leton- General of the Antroth Army

Averil Daxur- A gun for hire working alongside the heroes.

Zillafire101's Characters:

Ugandalore the Untouchable - Current leader of the Ugandalorians.

Ecotaptor's Characters:

W'tze - Current ruler of the Waptoria Alliance of Species