Thread:Zillafire101/@comment-5496489-20151027142437/@comment-25309944-20160112051502

@Gorzill : Alright, cool. I think I'll use the time to go back and revise some of my characters in the scene, improve them a little. I tend to write in two revisions, the first being the initial draft which establishes raw data, and the second which looks to elicit character.

@Eco Also responded to you.