Thread:Technobliterator/@comment-25644833-20141111133617/@comment-1370845-20141111155349

Adamalkin,

I am unsure why you approached me about this query. I am inactive in the fictionverse and I am no expert on what makes a good fiction or not in the slightest. I really cannot offer any input in the fiction itself, only in the design/format of the page. In that regard, I can tell you that it's fine, but you need to brush up on MediaWiki code. Your headers should not be used as they are now, they should look more like headers on another page. Try typing ==History== instead of what you have currently and you will see what I mean.

And for the record, you don't need to copy paste URL links. Just type Fiction:The Kin Sovereignty.