Thread:Cyrannian/@comment-5496489-20170102034953/@comment-5496489-20171005015122

@Cyrannian - Rather big change to the story involving my Inquisitor (as in a complete redo) and the UPD's best fighter pilot, but I need to get your approval for this since it involves something big.


 * The UPD attacks a major Imperial outpost, the loss horribly but their best fighter pilot manages to hack the bases computers and find a map detailing some major Imperial military supply routes.
 * The pilot escapes but her accel drive is damaged and she ends up stranded in deep space and must send out a distress signal, unfortunately she gets picked up by the Cyrannian Syndicate.
 * Crestiel is sent on a mission to kill the pilot and get the map from the Syndicate. She is captured by the Syndicate as well and sshe and the pilot must help each other escape. They do and fly to the Yesh'Ayin homeworld to get away.
 * The Yesh'Ayin take Crestiel prisoner (but treat her well) and let the pilot rest up. Crestiel breaks free though and is contacted by a Imperial fleet who want her to lower the shield around the Yesh'Ayin homeworld so they can glass the planet. Crestiel refuses and warn the Ayin'Yesh who drive off the Imperial fleet.
 * The Pilot, Crestiel, and an Ayin'Yesh master decide to take the map to the Aldárae Order. As thanks the Ayin'Yesh collectively put some sort of psychic shield or something on Crestiel so Tyrómairon can't kill her from a distance.

Is all this okay with you.