Thread:CrimsonFire735/@comment-25890179-20170514212937/@comment-25890179-20170908024258

I was gonna write it myself, but it might be more immersive if you wrote some of it as well, like from Deloros' perspective.

The story will be told in sections, each one comprised of ten chapters or so. Each section will have an overlying story to be resolved at the end.

I think the first section will jump right into the action with Fenric trying to rebuild his syndicate in the north by using his Spyke Syndicate connections to get involved in the trade of Fire Sand, a very potent narcotic. Deloros will hear of this, and will try to shut it down, leading to an all-out gang war between the two.

Eventually, Fenric will grow tired of Deloros and will travel south with a group of gunmen to kill him, leading to a heated gun battle between the two sides that ultimately results in the Vermillions retreating, but still maintaining a firm grip on the Fire Sand trade.

Section two will begin with a Fenric affiliate, Goar Taboryur, setting off bombs across Koridable, but that's all I have for now.

Any suggestions/edits are welcome.