Thread:Zillafire101/@comment-4001163-20130719075259/@comment-25932182-20131125221107

Uhm... I know this isn't my discussion, and I have no stake in the outcome of this fiction, but in my experience adding fictions in; any fiction, halfway in or something ends badly. Trust me, I've been down that road. :L Things get unfocused and inconsistant. And retconning Spartian's guys in after the fact will be even worse; You'd change so much you would basically have to rewrite it. This isn't a jab at anyone or anything, but a piece of advice. But if you honestly think you can make it work, though, go right ahead.