Thread:Wormulon/@comment-17649230-20150715010309/@comment-1073312-20150716011510

Hello.

It looks to me like a good start, with information spread into a few areas. While there isn't actually a rule about a level of completeness, I do not think it is ready yet for collaborative fiction. It would be nice to see the creatures who founded it, what they look like and some information about them. I'd also suggest concentrating on their culture and society, and especially economy at this point, and how they interact with foreign powers. You note that it has a slower advance of technology, so maybe why is something to work on.

I don't want to nitpick, but if they are inhabitants of the Milky Way, the Annihilation would have wiped out the founders of this empire, unless they had been saved by the Vi'Navitum arks, or maybe other Precursors (basically a pocket universe which temporally enclosed systems).