Thread:Externalization/@comment-4225622-20160130005814

Impy wanted to send you this message, though due to computer problems, I volunteered to send you this message. We have been talking about your stuff recently on the IRC. While I am impressed with the quality of your creations and your fiction for a new guy (still needs some work though), I think you have a few problems that need to be rectified if you wish to continue working on your fiction.


 * Most important: are no longer created. They are established regions that are rarely used in fiction and no more should be added unless with the consent of the community as a whole.
 * Art-style, you borrow a bit too much from Xho, what with your creatures and fractal art. Drawing inspiration is okay, outright copying is frowned upon, and Xho himself is particularly touchy about that. If you want to become prominent here, you should attempt to develop a unique creature style, to do your own thing.
 * You also borrow things from other users: some sections of your fiction are copied, sometimes word to word, such as the culture of the Plazith League. That is a pretty big offense and you should try to rectify it when possible.
 * In general originality is preferred, so even when you borrow things from other fiction (like with, say, the Sovereignty of Kau), you should try to add your own elements. You mostly borrowed all the names and abilities - trying to diverge from the D&D archetype would improve your fiction a lot.
 * Also, you cannot use symbols you did not create yourself or asked someone else to create for you. You thus must replace or remove the Vitiate Sith Empire's sigil you use for the Draekar Remnant.

I hope the following points will be understood and followed - for your sake as well as for ours. We have standards and rules, and you would do well to abide by them. 