Thread:Metashadow555/@comment-4864622-20120915233421/@comment-2081141-20120920031633

Apology accepted. Since I don't have the understanding of your fiction that you do, here's my best advice: Read over the page as if you were reading it for the first time, and ask yourself if there's anything you don't understand. Just work on it over time and add more details, then go through and see if there's anything that still doesn't seem complete. You'll get there eventually, you just need to be patient with it and give it as much time as it needs.