Thread:Wormulon/@comment-17235807-20130924023012/@comment-1073312-20130924170856

Hello, welcome to the wiki. I think it is good that your fiction has a background story to it's origins already. Looks interesting.

I would like to add some constructive criticism that you may want to consider. For example its not clear how the Legion who were fighting the Republic suddenly changed their mind and helped the Republic recover, or is it that the Republic is not the collection? I'm sure this is what you mean by a work in progress however.

If they are Tier 3, they won't be a Kardashev 4 civilisation, which would mean they have mastery over all matter and all forces on a universal scale. More like a kardashev 2 civilisation, one which generates energy equivalent to that of a star throughout their interstellar civilisation. On the extreme end a tier 3 civilisation might do this by creating clouds of orbiting satellites and space habitats to orbit a star (or rather statites which remain at fixed points around it) with mirrors or solar panels or by beaming microwave energy from these statites back to planets. Basically using the radient energy of a star for whatever purpose they desire.

You may want to use the quote template for quotes, here is an example - "the words"

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