Thread:Technobliterator/@comment-5714344-20121213075148

http://spore.wikia.com/wiki/Fiction:Aeoneonatrix/Religion

Alright, so I've made this. I'd add the "Under construction" thing If I knew what it's code was.

So my concerns with it are that

1: The Cleanser might be too God-like. He's supposed to be an immortal with a God complex, but, he really just acts like a God.

2: Though the religion contains explicit false doctrines, it's "trueness" might also be too much. It has existed since the beginning of the species and is completely right on all but maybe 2 issues. The Religion doesn't focus much on real Gods and other immortals, but "Contains passing mentions" of them.

3: The Cleanser appears regularly on planet wide television. Is this too much?

4: The Cleanser is said to be able to gain power. Is this over-powered?

I'd like to get this article in line with the Rules. I don't know of any guidelines that FORBID immortals with God complexes, trueness of this level, Visible Gods, or Immortals who can gain more power, but these elements have a feel to them that scares me. I may just be being paranoid but I'd like to know if this is okay. 