Thread:Gorzill/@comment-4001163-20141214171944/@comment-4960835-20150103203039

Gorzill wrote: I have an idea for the Drenched Coast, Niyra and co enter to go fetch that lost fire orb, but the place floods and Niyra almost drowns, but is pulled out by Jallas and Timaal(Blaize showing up as well?). However Niyra starts to suffer from water poisoning until Nara shows up and gives her the proper medical attention. This creates further increase in tension with Nara threatening to take custody of Niyra and Niyra and the other cadets begin to feel marginalized, a VERY important plot point.

Prehaps not Jallas,Timaal and Blaize. The reason is that the Drenched Coast was were I planned to briefly introduce characters for the continuation of the Niyra story arc in the far future. One of them would -using ater control- cause the whole area to flood, but his superior, being an exellent swimmer, would save her, before quickly leaving.