User talk:Etzan/The Katar Sector/@comment-5709731-20130207154540/@comment-5365119-20130211035315

"The Jum'Ari Empire is a militaristic monarchy, spanding over more than 43.000 star systems, where the Emperor is supreme and controls his people's every action."

Whoa, whoa, whoa. Your empire owns more inhabitable star systems than all of the empires in the Katar Sector combined. (To give you an idea of the scale we're using, the Drodo Empire has roughly 5,000 systems in its main territory.)

I strongly suggest you give it less star systems, especially if you're going to start out at tier 4. Races at that level of technology generally have not developed the means to control a dominion of more than several hundred, perhaps a thousand star systems.

Warp drive, for example, can only carry you so far so fast. If you can't cross your own territory in a short amount of time, you can't effectively enforce your laws, quench rebellion, or as the Russians learned in the Russo-Japanese War in 1906, wage war beyond your borders.

Other than that, I like your fiction. It's well written, though what makes them so hostile to outsiders?

We also have a good amount of belligerent fictions in the Katar Sector already, though, which might make things a little difficult. I'd be glad to speak to you about how we could include you in the sector's power structure on IRC sometime. :)