Thread:Ecoraptor3339/@comment-5496489-20160524151005/@comment-5496489-20161107235048

By the way change to the plan of Mirus Divided. Basically this is going further into the Vanara's back story and revealing the twist that the Vanara were never intended to be the Persacron's descendants, that honor was supposed to go to a more peaceful race, psychotic and sadistic. However Tandaris, Ava, and Warlord Argent realized that with Leless and the Scelus having gone rouge, and the Devourers and Qliphoggr's fragments out there, a race of living weapons was needed.

Basically what happens is that the race that was supposed to be the Persacron's descendants appears in Mirus and starts making friends. They're a very peaceful bunch called the Afonire with a utopian society, just one thing they want to commit genocide on the Persan and are being manipulated by Norman Page who is being retconned as an adviser to the Afonire's leader. Other than this same basic plot.

@Charles this shouldn't screw up the occupation Meneto I have a plan for that.
 * The Persan invade Meneto and occupy it without a fight.
 * The French aren't able to get mobilized at the moment, but the Afornire are and get the French to allow them to fight the Persan until the French get mobilized.
 * The Persan meanwhile, with their skill at zanny schemes, set up a system of cloaking devices and hardlight holograms to make colonized worlds in Meneto seem uninhabited and uncolonized worlds look colonized and like the persan have already set up shop.
 * The Afonire attack and the Persan goad them into several serious violations of the Zadkiel Conventions.
 * The French get to Meneto and seeing what the Afonire have done attack them leaving the Afonire wedged between the French offense and the persan defense.
 * The Afonire forces in Meneto are destroyed and the Persan turn back the territory to French right away, revealing their cloaking devices and holograms deception before heading off to drive the Afonire away from the area around their space once and for all.

How's this sound?