Thread:Cyrannian/@comment-26433419-20160614005451/@comment-1633483-20160830151107

Nice work on your pages, particularly your ships, very impressive indeed! By the way, you may find discussing story details easier on IRC, it's where most of the community can be found and is a more efficient method of communication than message walls. As for your story, the overall premise sounds good, but I have a few comments.


 * It wouldn't be in Aeresius' nature (or authority) to order the Navy to destroy the Serapis. is a more likely candidate.
 * Tyrómairon is more of a background puppet master and would be unlikely to be involved in such matters. Funnily enough, Aeresius may fit here instead. Or Senator.
 * Capricaerón would be a contentious site for a diplomatic meeting, as it's known to be intensely anti-Imperial. Additionally, it's unlikely that Valkistair would agree to host a diplomatic conference with the Empire.

Apart from that, it sounds like a good idea. Hopefully we can discuss it in more detail on IRC!