Thread:Ecoraptor3339/@comment-5496489-20171102142934/@comment-25890179-20171217203708

Alright. It'll be fun to participate in a rewrite of my favorite story. I especially want to show Fenric as he once was: one of Barda's top generals.

However, we are going to make a new page for this correct? Not overwrite the old one?

I have one other thing to add. The story being centered on Ugandalore for most of it really made it feel like a real war, with the battles actually progressing how they would if four hostile factions were fighting each other at once. I don't know about cutting away from Ugandalore; perhaps we should just add more perspectives on other locations to increase the scope.