Thread:Wormulon/@comment-29927902-20161217175252/@comment-1073312-20161221001432

Hello, sorry for the long wait.

You've certainly written a lot of background material, and better still, linked parts of it to the fiction universe's history, like the War of Ages and Grox Meta-Empire. I'd say well done, not many new fictions go that far so soon and it opens up opportunity for collaboration if those old fictions get revisited. I quite like the stuff referring to reverse logic and their art.

In terms of formatting I find it a bit hard to read, because it has lots of small paragraphs with double line-spacing and indentation. I suggest making the paragraphs bigger.

Also note that wormholes are a hyperspatial technology. While its possible they never invented hyperdrives, I'm doubtful they'd be ignorant of hyperspatial physics even if it was limited. Unless of course, wormholes were merely taken and used by them rather than invented.