Thread:Gorzill/@comment-4001163-20141214171944/@comment-4001163-20150130041815

We'll if we're all being honest here, I truthfully didn't think this huge chunk of Niyra's training should be dedicated to this guild stuff. Also it's TOO similar to the Mystery Dungeon series and doesn't really fit with the genre we've managed to establish. I mean we all have our styles if writing, but as Zilla said this arc seemed out of place within the story. It makes the page very long and doesn't seem to correspond with the main plot of the villains showing up. This story seems to be a bit more serious with some humor thrown in, but this part of the story seems over the top.

I hope my statement doesn't come off as too harsh or anything. But if Gorzill believes that this is unecdessary then he has every right to exclude it from the story, just like you had the right to add it. But I think the final dicision is up to him, since I he created the initial plot of the original story.