Thread:CrimsonFire735/@comment-25890179-20170514212937/@comment-25890179-20170927043016

So Zilla, I changed Fenric's quote on Chokuto's page. To make Fenric more interesting, I'm trying to move him more towards how I originally envisioned him, concerned with honor and duty but still a vicious pragmatist. I'm also amping up another trait of his that was present early on but later reduced: his fanaticism. Rather than run his organization like a gang, it should be portrayed more as a sadistic cult that will do anything for power. They also like to burn and sacrifice people. So there will be more of this in his upcoming stories.

But back to Chokuto. I originally thought Fenric would hold some disdain for Chokuto and only help him because his aunt convinced him too. But perhaps Fenric has respect for him instead when he hears about him gathering his own army, and decides he should help him. What do you think?