Thread:Externalization/@comment-26967500-20151120015734

No offense, I just wanna leave some advice about your Gatekeepers fiction, and while I do not want to influence or change your fiction, I do want to give some of my opinion about the Gatekeepers, and I will show information from the fiction page. You can let me know if you have didn't have enough time or other things.

"(The Gatekeepers) are a powerful empire with few equivalents"

It's a bit off when there could be hundreds of empires who are just as threatening, maybe the Gatekeepers rely on sheer numbers? Maybe they are made of millions of races? Maybe they have a fleet that's powerful? You could make them more unique from other empires, maybe their dimensional technology is not as advanced? Maybe they still use bullets or musket balls in their weapons?

"Their presence Mirus is limited and not even 1% of their full power"

I don't really see how only 1% of their power is very formidable, maybe their presence at the Gigaquadrant is a recon or minor military fleet? Maybe they only use ground forces to invade planets? Some of these are ideas that I wanted to use for the Kashuthil, unlike other powerful conquerors, the Kashuthil are more industrial and resourceful, so they're not really ideas for you to use. No offense, but the Gatekeepers don't look like something that you would take seriously (especially since they don't really live up to their name). I don't want to put you in a bad mood or cause trouble since that would cause me to get berated.

Have a great day! 