Thread:No Offense/@comment-5616023-20121103054933/@comment-5308094-20121103064713

Oh, found it. Maybe it should be called Fiction:Qvik instead. But Whatevs.

Anyways, I think it's interesting, though I do have some questions. How did they master and replicate the technology given to them "overnight"? Perhaps different wording should be used. Maybe "became a Tier 4 race abnormally quickly"? Overnight just is too quick.

Higher species granting others technology is very possible, so I have no nitpick with that, but I find their biology very....perplexing. They live only 11 years? I understand that these creatures reproduce a bunch throughout life, but I still find it somewhat...unrealistic.

Also, what do you mean by "captured 100,000 planets in less than a year..."? If you mean "colonize" it's okay, but actually having and winning 100,000 wars in less than a year seems a bit of a stretch.

Love the history though! Very nice and detailed, and it shows some of the more unrealistic factors realistically by relating the eventual lack of numbers in armies, with war tactics. Very well done in that respect.

Also, I have a suggestion: the Qvik, due to their homeworld being a planet of extreme gravitational force, can jump to incredible heights when on other smaller planets. Wouldn't that be neat?