Thread:The Clanden/@comment-5024875-20120824171748/@comment-5365119-20120905025233

It's definitely better, but you still have them advancing from a tribal empire to a republic encompassing over one hundred worlds in two hundred years without any outside stimuli.

Also, this sentence is rather confusing: "Applon was arguing with Acktus while he was arguing with Applon and Merdais."

- Fiction:Bastnliues Republic/History