Thread:Zillafire101/@comment-4960835-20140119200145/@comment-5496489-20140820203644

I can see that, intense as well. In any case it sounds good, but I would like to make some alterations to the portions dealing with Vanara characters. The Zarbanian Powers sneak down to Matrukoris Moria while all the fighting is going on through a gap in both UAE and rebel lines that the Moderator intentionally creates(the Moderator wants to see if Moria will be able to beat Akanri). Meanwhile Akanri goes into labor as the White Six attack and the others must defend her until Niyra and 2C Nuy show up and help turn the tide of the fight. Akanri gives birth and after regaining her strength heads off after Moria who has been fighting Nara. Akanri sends Nara away and engages Moria and Moria ends up knocking Akanri out, but before she can killer her has the detonator to the bombs in her body activate by Krad apparently killing her(whether or not she actually dies is not known). Krad than kidnaps Akanri because he views her as a Messiah like figure and wants to use her to create a new race of Vanara and leaves planet with her. After the rest of the fighting is over Seerkar finds out what happened and prepares to go on a bloody quest to get her back. Any way that's what I had in mind feel free to suggest any changes.