User:Monet47/Archive 1

RE:Adding fiction to the universe
To be honest, I don't think the Obscurus Galaxy should exist myself; far too minor a location to be used. Aside from to make it more active, although it's not really in the universe due to innactivity, why would Obscurus be a good place to put the empire?-- 08:52, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

RE:
Andromeda has a plenty of place, and I will recommend you to place your empire close to the core. There are no Grox in there, after all. - Imperios  -   We are eternal...  14:01, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reply from Wentals to Unknown Vessel
"We are coming to help you, we should be there in a few minutes. We have functioning singularity drives and are willing to lend it to you, if you promise to return it. We don't have a ton of those right now."

- Random Captain

A large and ungainly vessel appears in the viewport. It looks only half built, but is certainly moving at a decent speed.

Always Confused, MasterMachine -Sometimes there are no right choices- 13:48, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

"That is acceptable. We will make sure to keep your diplomat in a habitat moduel so she doesn't get harmed by our form of life. She'll be safe with us!"

- Random Captain

Always Confused, MasterMachine -Sometimes there are no right choices- 19:55, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Cultural Clashes with the Draconis
"Before you start placing any colonies, be warned that everything within 10 parsecs of any former colony of ours is home to Mecholife, which is compatible with biolife. However, biolife is rarely compatible with mecholife, so if you colonize within 10 parsecs of the entire New Wental Sector of Andromeda you will almost certainly encounter deadly and probably aggressive mecholife. We request that you do not attack it, as doing so will be felt throughout the Network. Just... avoid it. That would probably be safest for all involved.

"The Mechanization was an attack on our species by a formerly unknown computer intelligence called the Sacis. They created the converter nanotech and used it in an attempt to take control over all Wentalian species. This backfired and converted all life on our colonies into mecholife, basically normal life but non-biological and moving at various levels of speed. Mecholife is 100% non-biological, meaning it has little to no carbon and can exist in almost any known environment. It s very dangerous biospheres, and usually destroys them or replaces them within a few years of encountering them, though the process was far swifter in the early days. Be warned that if you feel Mecholife to be a threat to your cultural and legal standards it will not bode well for our future relationships, as we have no choice in the matter. We are what we are, and that cannot be changed. Not that we would want it to, Mecholife is far stronger and more adaptable then Biolife."

- Remlap of the Wentals

Always Confused, MasterMachine -Sometimes there are no right choices- 18:51, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

"That is good news indeed. when I first heard the message I was worried it would end up starting a war or conflict. Stupider stuff has happened in the past. However, there may be some... issues to work out. You see, technically all mecholife is made of self-replicating nanobots. They are, essentially, our cells and even sub-cellural makeup. There are also a few diseases made up of cellular and independent organisms, all non-biological, which may count as nanotech if you want to get technical about it. I hope such won't cause problems, but it's best to just openly address a potential issue rather then have it bite both sides in the ass later."

- Remlap of the Wentals

Always Confused, MasterMachine -Sometimes there are no right choices- 11:01, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

"That is perfectly acceptable, but if you plan to place the relay with the 10 parsec zone, it would be best to have a few heavily armored vessels and a few larger weapons mounts sent with it. Anything less and the entire ship could become somethings dinner... We will send in some ships on our end to help clear out the area. Also, we will send a diligent (ambassador) back to your empire with the returning relay delivery ships. I can't come personally, much to old for a journey like that, but is much younger and the only peaceful you'll ever meet. She's pretty adventurous too, so she'll be a good choice for this. I hope we can have peaceful relations, and an alliance is always a good thing in this unfriendly universe."

- Remlap of the Wentals

My IRC screen name is now MasterMachine, though Pervy_Prince, Siv_Semi_here, and Machine are also possibilities.

Always Confused, MasterMachine -Sometimes there are no right choices- 11:40, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Response to the Blog


This is a request of a drawing of one of my critters, they're the Kraw, my main species in my Kraw Galaxy. The drawing should be of the full creature, either the male or the female can be used. Take your time :D Also, if you want more details, check "Dressed Kraw (Fe)Male V2" on Sporepedia, account name Irskaad. Ok? Have a nice time!

Irskaad - Talk to me - Halloway, United, Free, and Awesome. - Date and Time: 16:32, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Science!
"Hi, I'm Jasmine. I'm a Wental Council Member, like Hinata, except that I'm interested in your biology. Are we allowed to come over with a small team and learn about your biological processes? We'll only use volunteers and will be happy to share information about our mechology as well!"

- Jasmine of the Wentals

Always Confused, MasterMachine -Sometimes there are no right choices- 15:18, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

"You misunderstood me. Must be the biological part of you, I'm sure you're very smart for biological creatures. What I meant was that we would be willing to tech you about mecholife and how WE work, not about how you work. Sillys!"

- Jasmine of the Wentals

(She's a little.... strange)Always Confused, MasterMachine -Sometimes there are no right choices- 16:54, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

I've got a Beef with You, Draconis
"Hello, I'm Titrit! I'm a member of the Wental Council, which is the main governing body of the Wentals. I have a beef with you. Now, I have nothing against your kind, Draconis, but I do find the fact that you own slaves to be.... disturbing. Slavery is not legal within our empire, and as such we as a whole dislike the idea. Having personally been a slave before the reformation of government that lead to the Wentals coming to be as a faction, I have a particular hatred for it. So, the problem I see is that you have slaves. While I cannot legally attempt to remove them, I would like to urge you into setting them free, or at least giving them legal rights to their own self-ownership. For example, I noticed when reading an updated bit on your laws that the children of slaves are slaves by birth, nothing more. I find this to be very primitive. They did nothing wrong, why should they pay for it? Also, are the children allowed to stay with their families, or are families torn to shreds simply because of greed, as was the case in my former empire? Besides that, the idea of owning a thinking creature just seems revolting to me. I urge you to change your laws a little, maybe allowing third generation slave children to become full citizens? I won't, and can't, force anything, but I can assure you there will be opposition from many parts of the Wentals government and populous."

- Titrit of the Wentals }}

His page needs to be updated, and I personally don't care, just realized that would be another thing to have the two empires interact about. Always Confused, MasterMachine -Sometimes there are no right choices- 15:00, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

RE:You are cordially invited...
"We gladly accept this invitation. Good news in relation to the topic, we've managed to come up with a way of killing off all potentially dangerous mecholife we may carry in, turns out we have a higher resistance to EMPs then other mecholife, so we just dose it with that and it all dies. Titrit came up with the idea while under house arrest from that.... incident. We're capable and willing, mostly, to eat anything you want to serve. I would like to note that there are some pure carnivores and pure herbivores among the leaders of our people, so if you can, get at least 3 meals of greens only. If not, they'll have to stay behind."

- Remlap

Always Confused, MasterMachine -Sometimes there are no right choices- 11:40, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

"Not at all, not at all. After he'd been returned we placed him under house arrest. We're more concerned about how it may have angered you, after all, it was our fault more then yours. I'm hopeful that this means there are no hard feelings on your side either. And thanks for placing care into the food selection, that will make the dinner go along better. Wound't end well if some of the councilors came back sick because they ate something they shouldn't have eaten."

- Remlap

Request
I was wondering if you could possibly make me a picture or two. I don't have Galactic Adventures, so there are a lot of pictures I can't make myself.Could you make me a battle picture or so? --Pinguinus impennis 18:18, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

If at all possible, I would like an army ofthese creatures fighting an opposing army of these creatures. The weapons would be automatic rifles and tanks. Maybe a few low-flying battleships. Other than that, you would be able to exercise quite a lot of artistic license. Pinguinus impennis 18:40, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Scale Creatures + November Drawing Request
1. Here are the creatures and their sizes for the scale graph:





2. So I won't stress you out, Monet, I've decided to only request you Drawings once every month, so here's my November Request:


 * They're the Tahars, my anti-theist bastards. The drawing should be of the full creature, either the male or the female can be used. Also, if you want more details, check "Dressed Tahar (Fe)Male V2" on Sporepedia, account name Irskaad.

Details: (If you need more details, talk to me on private)


 * They have self-heating shirts, with electronics with are resistant to rain, which are usually on the bottom-right of the front of the shirt. The electronics are flat and inside the shirt. The shirt has some white lines which glow due to the electronics, which are powered by sunlight. They cover down to the waist and through all of the arms and up to the neck. For shorts, the cover to the knees, and present similar features to the shirts they use. Tahars usually have small helmets with headphones, which are their equivalent of radio-tuners and MP3 players. Tahars don't wear shoes.

Good luck!

Irskaad - Talk to me - Halloway, United, Free, and Awesome. - Date and Time: 20:01, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Scale Races
I know I must be like an annoying mosquito in your ear, but I thought I might as well post my races that could go on the chart:



It's totally optional. Do what ever you like, and I'm sorry for bothering you. --Vulturewing 01:33, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

oh, ok... you're welcome then. ;) --Vulturewing 17:52, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Request
Hello, I saw some of the pictures you drew. I was wondering if you could draw a picture of a certain character for me. She is a female dragon, orange, thin, and graceful. I would be very grateful to you if you could do this. --Pinguinus impennis 17:41, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Unfinished Business
Yeah, I'm sorry I haven't been so active recently. School has been hitting me hard, along with home life. However, I will try and get onto the IRC soon. For now, Tyraz's fleet is heading for Alcanti, following the Khaxvis's route. The Niddan Ho are being prepared for dropping onto Alcanti. I will give you more details later.

Lucario of the Gods (talk 12:27, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Dragon Request
I would like her to somewhat resemble this, if possible. Just orange and slightly thinner. --Pinguinus impennis 15:14, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! --Pinguinus impennis 15:26, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Request
Hey, can you do me a request? Could you by any chance do a pic of Tyraz and Iovera together? Lucario of the Gods (talk 13:14, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Tyraz with his arm around Iovera's shoulder while she looks to him blushing. Lucario of the Gods (talk 16:29, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Incoming Transmission from the TIAF - Draconis Channel
Greetings, Paragon, we have received your message and we have deliberated over it carefully.

''As much as I hate to say it, however, the Assembly has notified me saying that the peace treaty did not pass in either house, so I am afraid that we must decline your offer. In fact, grumbles of war with the Imperium are begin to rise within the Assembly. So I would be very careful from this point on if I were you...'' -Captain Lorrelas of the TIAF

Lulz, are you trying to mind-screw the TIAF? :P The TIAF has already deployed its fleets to Andromeda and now you ask for peace? :P

''Very well, Paragon, we will honor the armistice treaty with the Shellious in Bunsen. However, I will sternly warn you: Any violation of the treaty on your side, and we WILL declare the armistice void and annex all Shellious-Draconis expansion in Bunsen, by force if necessary. Other than that, there is no more to say. Farewell, Paragon.'' --Captain Lorrelas of the TIAF

In the amount of time its taken to communicate, the TIAF fleets would already be realistically be in orbit of the outer Draconis outposts in Andromeda :P Let teh war begin!

shellious draconis
helo monet. any idea for the shellious draconis interactions? also i saw your drawings. amaaaaaazing! anyway any idea? im thinking something to do with shellis, the mechanization, or another artifact.

Twink --  I can get confusing   real fast.  18:36, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Bunsen would be left out. It is the andromeda war. We could discuss more on IRC. the shellious need conflict so i have 5 options. ok tell me what you think of these possibilities.
 * 1) The shellious and draconis get caught in some plan to merge on with the other over trade control.
 * 2) shellious get mechanized by wental converters
 * 3) shellious and draconis break truce with divinarium causing mass destruction
 * 4) remnant creators of artifacts are discovered on remote world
 * 5) eat cake. oh with butter and frosting. ok that last one is just a joke but cake is good

Twink --  I can get confusing   real fast.  23:13, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

ok then so im guessing that meens we are good with 1 and 4 for 4 sides (hehe lots o 4) so ill make sure to start working on them.
 * 1) it would be interesting to see a evil thingy within a good thingy that could also be within another evil thingy for consperacy. allies would fight and evil thingies would get popcorn then get raped killed by good thingies.
 * 2) the idea here for mechanization should be discussed later in the exodus so this is off
 * 3) the 3rd option is off so...
 * 4) ill make sure to go on irc to talk to imp about this.

Twink --  I can get confusing   real fast.  16:02, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

RE: A few things about the battle
Let's use a graviton sphere, simply because it sounds cooler than tractor beams :P

I would say at least one of the canisters will detonate, as while the battle was coming to a close, one of the ships (USS Raysong) took one aboard their ship to study. Of course, that depends whether it detonates immediately after it enters the cargo bay. If it's delayed, the USS Raysong would have probably entered low orbit of Vanaxia, in the atmosphere.

And I hope you've saved the battle log somewhere, it'll be a b*tch to do again :P

In that case, the USS Raysong will get a huge hole in the side of its hull :P

And I know that I cut off right as they were negotiating the terms of the surrender, but standard TIAF policy is to have a short period of martial law to help with transition, and establish a democratic republican system to fit with the rest of the TIAF. Unless the inhabitants want a monarchy... But I find it hard to believe that the Draconis will turn down an offer of political freedom :P

We just need to add that to the conversation, and then we can put the battle on the war page.

Looks like we're only getting one chamber's worth of explosion then :P

So if that's the case regarding the transition, then the Draconis should not feel politically different, except during the short martial transitionary stage. The TIAF would allow the Draconis to keep their government, as long as it is compatible with the TIAF's federal set-up, which the Draconis should have no problem fitting in with.

But they have to pledge loyalty to the TIAF. Betrayals don't go over well for the TIAF :P

On a side note, when do you expect the battle can be posted to the Andromeda War page?

Re: IRC
Huh? I don't remember you being rude to me at all! Hopefully I should get finish the creation next week. -- - Cyrannian   - Something Wicked This Way Comes...   12:15, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Request is done
Holy Xho that's awesome! I am now tempted to ask for the rest of my characters done, but they don't have good descriptions... but all in all, epicness hath been achieved! Thank you for the present! Always Confused, MasterMachine -Hakuna Matata, what a wonderful phrase!- 15:48, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Fate of my Fiction
As some may know and many probably don't, I am leaving Sporewiki by January 1st. That will leave some very large holes where my fiction used to be if I just have them pull out, so I would like certain people to take care of them for me until they reach the point where I have them leave.

The Wentals and Starmasters will merge into a greater entity called the UDUM, and then said entity will leave the first gig until I get back from living my life. However, they don't do this until the end of the Andromeda War, and that's only 1/4th the way through att the date 12/26/2011, which is when I write this up. I only have about a week left on the wiki before I hit my deadline, so I want to make sure the Wentals and Starmasters are both crushed and thus forced to merge into a single entity during the Andromeda War. I want you, Imperios, and you Monet, to take care of them until the end of the Andromeda War. I have a few things that I want to happen to them during the war, but besides those few things anything can go. Here are the few things that I would like to have done before they merge:


 * Masuri must fight and kill his evil self that still works for Br'Klakkon.
 * The Wental Capitol must be completely destroyed by someone.
 * The Starmaster Alliance should come in as a hopeful peacemaker that fails utterly.
 * Queen Abarn, of the Kwaad, must be killed (she is Hinata's mother and Nampts wife).
 * The Wentals must learn of Dylans actions against Masuri.
 * Masuri must become a nicer person.
 * The Wentals must start using the Conerter Bots as a weapon against enemies.
 * The two must merge into one entity after they lose a lot of power.
 * The Starmasters must be converted into Mecholife.

Always Confused, MasterMachine -Hakuna Matata, what a wonderful phrase!- 18:02, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re:
Thanks! That's a good spessship. - Imperios  -   We are eternal...  07:27, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Incoming Transmission from 
A secure transmission from the ******* Galaxy to the Quadrants via a secure channel.

"We thank you for your offer. We would love help defending against that corrupt Empire. Please respond with anything that might help. Thank you."

- Covert-Operations General Corvar

Bio21 -  Comms  Channel   23:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * "Ah, excellent. We may be able to position spies amongst them. But, surveillance will also be good."

- Covert-Operations General Corvar

"Ah yes, I agree. When will we meet?"

- Covert-Operations General Corvar

Incoming Transmission from the TIAF - Theian Channel
We have received your message, Theians, and we would like to give you a very warm welcome to our galaxy, Bunsen, and to the First Gigaquadrant as a whole.

''We have traced the origin of the message to the Delta Sector of our galaxy. While you are fully welcome there, as it is still mostly-unoccupied TIAF space, we would like to warn you of a few things. There is another nation with colonies in Delta, the Shellious Imperium, and we are legal enemies. However, do not try to assist us by attacking them; we have agreed to a treaty to create a DMZ around that area.''

''Also, once you're settled, it will be a good idea to get into Gigaquadrant politics, but we would like to caution you of a few nations you should be wary about. Specifically, the Galactic Empire of Cyrannus, Kraw Empire (not the Kraw Federation, do be careful about this), and nations with the phrase "Deathmarch" in them would not make for good diplomatic partners.''

''We will soon send construction supplies and gladly help with your development. If it is within your desires, you may become a Commonwealth of our Federation, though we hope that the Theians will soon be able to support themselves without becoming a protectorate state. Good will to you all, and may this be the beginning of a beautiful friendship.'' -Lieutenant Samenor of the TIAF

Still waiting on that new Firestorm chapter :P

RE:Request Done
Thanks Monet! I already saw it and put it on the shellious page. I like the detail in the clothing and the shell(especially making the transparent cultural outfit and shell I was unable to do in spore). You know, if you ever became a writer you could probably do your own illustrations.-- Twink --   I can get confusing   real fast.  02:22, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

The Reason
I was sadly,unable to get onto the IRC.However,I believe that I thought my Delpaxia may have a cameo appearance.The reason my Delpaxia would participate is listed below.user:Serpentaxy400

Delpaxia Transmission
''We believe it is time to help the Khaxvis Resurgence who we highly respect....We have already given them 120 soldiers, of course this amount of soldiers wouldn't help them in this war very much. So we have decided to send them fleets,and if necessary, participate in this war completely. ''Zev of the Delpaxia.

Respond to me under this message when you can,and thank you for responding to my last request.

Reply
House Khaxvis themselves have been laying low since the battle of Alcanti but it's not unusual for them to use other parties (bribes, promises, encuragement etc.) for their operations. The bulk of their armed forces is mercenaries so you can still take part if you want.

As a tip, leave spaces after commas and full-stops. --Monet47 - "Immortality is an elusive thing" 00:10, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Another question
If I may have the Delpaxia have a cameo or a medium part of their appearance, where would you like it to be and what type of things should I add? user:Serpentaxy400

Thanks for the hint!

Oh
That is disappointing. Unfortunately, I am not willing to pay that kind of money for this picture. Or any kind of money. Sorry we couldn't do business. --Pinguinus impennis 00:52, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Incoming Encoded Transmission
"Attention Agent 3-8-5, we have received intelligence that the Imperium has come into contact with the Empire, and I feel it is necessary to prevent an alliance. We must arrange for a meeting between us and perhaps several of my subordinates. This is of the upmost importance to gigaquadratic security. Corvar out."

- Special Operations General Corvar

Bio21 -  Comms  Channel   04:53, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

"Yes, I believe that I would like to speak to him as well. Hopefully, we can learn more about what happened. I shall be glad to meet you again, and perhaps we can sort all of this out peacefully. Corvar out."

- Special Operations General Corvar

Bio21 -  Comms  Channel   12:50, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's a message on the Draconid Imperium page for you
Hey Monet, anyway there's a message on the Draconid Imperium talk page for you.I hope you respond.

Serpentaxy400 23:36, May 11, 2012 (UTC)