Thread:Um2k9/@comment-4741182-20120703002112/@comment-4741182-20120704012034

Okay, here's another version. I think we'll both like this story.

Apollo was in the Grox Cube taking him to the Quadrant Galaxies. A few minutes passed. But then, a black spacecraft zoomed past the Cube. Suddenly, on the Cube, there was a huge explosion and knocked out everyone on the Cube, including Aedan Apollo Cretacea, with a blinding flash of white light.

The next morning, Apollo and the ruins of the Cube were on an unknown planet. Everyone was still asleep. Just then right behind Apollo who was still knocked out, a rift in spacetime opened up, and four robotic tentacle-like arms pulled Apollo into it, and the rift closed. The arms pulled Apollo into the lab of an unknown facility. After a few hours, Apollo's eyes opened up, and he was disassimilated from when the Grox had kidnapped him. Apollo was just like himself again. But when his eyes opened, he could only see the shadow of a creature much larger than Apollo. Its red firery eyes stared at Apollo in an angry way.

Apollo - ...Where- ...Where am I? Unknown Figure - You're in your worst nightmare...

The figure stepped out from the darkness and revealed himself to be Stenton Vykantius, the unstoppable leader of the Cryce Empire. Stenton took out a lightling slicer sword and held it up to Apollo's chin. Stenton was 4 meters taller than Apollo. Apollo couldn't move, for he was strapped into a mechanical bed.

Stenton - I was GOING to kill you......but instead, I'll save you for last...after I kill your father, your family and all of your kind...

Stenton called in two soldiers who unstrapped Apollo and by force, put him in one of the escape pods of the Cryce facility spacecraft and launched it toward Colonial One. At the beginning of this, Stenton used his powers to cause the explosion on the Grox Cube to get Apollo and let him know of their new enemy's existance...

I hope you liked this one! Will it probably fit?