SporeWiki:Fiction Guidelines/Bad Starter Example

The Noob Empire is the best empire in the entire universe!! They are gonna kill everyone with their biggest fleet ever, with bazillions of bazillions of ships the size of the universe and Superweapons that have killed billions of empires!! They have only destroyed a few GROX. But they willz destroy them wit their mighty ships, Then their immortal soldiers will finish the rest.

They are totally Tier 0, and are allied with teh Xhodocto*, and are huge immortal and omnipotent gods which can kill SPODE! Some tink they are da False God That Will Come. They have all the energies.

They creturs themselfs is absolute BADMANS, more badman than the LORON! They listen to EMINEM ALL DAY LONG and listening to eminem gives them STRENGTH THEY NEED to defeat the weak GOOD STARTED EXAMPLE!!!! And even bigger than that!

They hav pwned the GOOD STARTED EXAMPE EMPIRE and are on dere way to pwning the URC, DCP AN EVERYONE ELSE!

Basically, BWAHAHAHAHAHA THESE THNINGS WILL PWN 4LL!!!!!!! They don't like your species, and will KILL EM, wth their ULTRA PWNERATOR RAY, which can destroy 5 universes in ONE SHOT MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

*Which must be asked for first, in which this user didn't

quotes from other usas

idk how this works but say

"Fools!"

- GSE

"This fiction is... horrible. Poor in almost every way possible. All I can say is... here's what not to do."

- Technobliterator

quotes from them

how do u do teh quote thing

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHA IMMA KNOK YOU OUT WIV MA SUPA LASOR THATS BETTA DEN YOURS!!!!!!!

EMINEM 4 LYF!!!! HOW WE HEARD IT URRRR IDK WE JUST DID

What is usually not acceptable
It is not uncommon for new fictions in the universe to go down the wrong way, these are things that usually get critisized.
 * Instantly Omnipotent empires and races that are billions of years old, even older than the universe - SporeWiki Fiction Universe already has a few of these, such as the "First Ones" and "Tier 0 civilizations", but doesn't really need anymore. A million years oold or so should be the upper limit for most, unless the fiction has a very imprtant purpose.  Alsi any civilizations outside the universe exist in timelessness, not a lack of time, but because their time is not running with the universe, which defeats the purpose of them being "100 billion years old".
 * Empires which have uberpowerful ships and superweapons - Most superweapons don't need to be any more powerful than cracking open a planet (such a weapon could easily cause an end of the world scenario), although more powerful technology such as "star killers" and planet busters need to be explained well enough to be plausible (example Q-ball forge) and only used rarely. Over-using such devices mnakes them boring and belirttles other users fiction.
 * Megastructures as big as small planets - Again, there are some fantastic megastructures, such as the Globus Cassus worlds of the DCP, however, over-use of such structures becomes annoying, one reason why Station Halcyon is only over 20 miles long. Also, at a certain size limit, where there would be so much mass the structure would collapse into a black hole.  And you don't want that to happen.  Make sure your megastructure (if your civilization can even build one) is inventive.  Finally, they are not built overnight.
 * Trends - Some popular fiction can gets copied over and over, which is annoying to some users. This includes super technologies, super-human strength, dark beings, energies and gods (which we have far too many on the wiki to deal with already).
 * Simple good vs. evil - It is really not that simple. Wars based on ideologies are getting more favoured on the wiki now, as well as the non-allied side winning.
 * Belittling fiction - When a user misinterprates the abilities of another fiction and makes their fiction better all the time without good explanation. This really gets on everyones nerves, and would even to the user causing in the first place if it happened to them.
 * Unofficial or unauthorized use - Sometimes new users say that their empire is an ally or and enemy of empires such as the Rambo Nation without asking permission from the creator, or use their fiction, creations or media without theor prior consent. Do not do this.
 * Entering ended fiction - An easy mistake for new users in the fiction universe. Look out for this template on finished collaborative fiction.  It is also important to ask permission from the creator before entering collaborative fiction, and to tell the user your plans, to make sure your ideas can work in it.
 * Fiction in the main namespace - Fiction and speculation does not mix in the main namespace. You got that?

Fiction that ignores these rules repeatedly is flamed off the fiction universe and trolled to the fires of Inferno Ream. They are quite simple rules that are easy to stick to. Of course mistakes could happen, but as long as they are fixed or discussed how to be improved with other users will fix these problems.