Thread:Wormulon/@comment-5018798-20120922115049/@comment-1073312-20120923193724

Hello. It all looks interesting; you have started the fiction with some important pages, and it would probably be a good idea to expand on them before making anymore.

Perhaps if you make sections that are too large it would be a good idea to extend the details on subpages, for example: Fiction:Holy Ka;Omneisi Empire/spaceships.