Thread:Zillafire101/@comment-4960835-20140119200145/@comment-25890179-20150112141531

Eco, you said you wanted to have Ghetsin go out on his own or something in an earlier post. Well I thought of a story about him, though I would like him to stay leader of the CoS, since he's one of my favorite characters. So here it is. I hope you enjoy.

So Ghetsin is told by either the Proditkar highlords or Solid and Lorka to go to the Mirusian Church/Brotherhood of Spode capital and recruit more Circle members. So he goes there, and successfully recruits a small group. However, the Church authorities track him down and kill him. His followers recover his body and try to revive him. Due to a technological malfunction, the whole hideout explodes, killing all his followers.

Ghetsin survives and is resurrected, but with a failing, undead-like body. He is very skinny and emaciated, and all his hair is dying and devoid of color. He has increased agility though, and some new power, like a warped, twisted form of essence or dark energy, or electrical powers. His body is very damaged, though; he has to eat huge amounts of food to survive.

So he starts wandering the streets and outskirts of the Church city, devouring anyone and anything he runs into and trying to contact his allies, since he cannot get in contact with anyone. He has no access to radio equipment or anything. So eventually, Ajar learns of him and tries to track him down. (Good place to introduce something about he and Ghetsin having been childhood friends or something.)

Ajar tracks him down, but keeps losing his trail. He eventually finds his way to some kind of broadcasting tower and brainwashes everyone on the planet except Ajar. However, one of the evil empires (Brotherhood of Darklings, Cyber Collective, Bachyeon, Scelus) attacks the planet. The leader of the empire attack force goes to the tower and attack both Ghetsin and Ajar, severing the brainwashing connection.

Somehow, Ajar will repel the attack, maybe opening the void or something, and defeating whatever invasion force is attacking them. The leader is still trapped in the tower and, unable to escape, defeats Ajar, and is about to kill him in revenge for spoiling his plans. Then, Ghetsin attacks the leader with his new powers, (because he and Ajar had once been friends, or because Ajar saved Ghetsin during the Return of THEM.), saving Ajar's life at the cost of his own. However, he survives the battle and later leaves to rejoin Lorka and Solid and lead the Circle of Sins.

I know it doesn't really fit with the Conflicts, but I really hope you like it and will consider using it.