Fiction talk:Colonization of the unknown

The story here is a bit messy in terms of structure and grammar. There seems to be some lacks of pauses and breaks in sentences and words are capitalized without periods (regular nouns, verbs, etc.) so I was left a bit confused at points of what the author was trying to say at some points. I do believe, however, that the story has the potential to be entertaining if edited and fixed enough. (Structure and grammar wise, keeping the majority of the story intact) This user has no life. You can contribute by expanding dong. (talk) 14:46, November 5, 2018 (UTC)