Thread:TheLostTreeDwellers/@comment-47205-20160423085100/@comment-47205-20160508194807

Nothing major. Certainly nothing fatal.
 * 1) Don't bother with the "Overview" section header. Just have that section as an introductory paragraph without the header.
 * 2) You only need to bold the name(s) of the article subject the first time they appear.
 * 3) Ideally, the tone should be more consistently encyclopaedic e.g. no first person. But you're almost completely consistent anyway.