Thread:78.63.215.110/@comment-1073312-20171007211415/@comment-47205-20171012193022

Hi,

While the Creature Stage article can be improved, and many of the things that you did to it were improvements, we believe that overall you've not gone about it in a good way.

Firstly, it is quite a large article and a featured one too, so we would prefer it if you proposed such large changes on the talk page first (for example, you could make a page "Creature Stage/rewrite", and then open up a discussion about it on the talk page). Secondly, many of your changes are not improvements; in particular, your changes to wording often introduce grammatical errors and even remove important information.

Because of how large they were, it is likely to take a while before anybody goes over your edits and ensures that they is all of suitable quality. Because of this, I've reverted them, although I have tried to keep and tweak the smaller changes that were obviously improvements. Hopefully any other improvements will be incorporated into the page in time.